Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Nice Drop...
Punches: Shotta - Your Punches Hit Much Harder N They Had Humor In Em Nice Shit.. Both Of Yall Keep Elevatin..
Word Play: Shotta - More Complex Shit In Yours.. Both Keep Elevatin..
Personals: Verbal.. You Had More Personals Usin His Screen Name N All But There's Still Room For Improvement... Keep Practicin.. Shotta U Shoulda Had A Lil Beside That Eileen Line Still Liked Ur Shit
Multis : None Really...
Vocab: Tie... Both Had A Lil Vocab But You Still Need To Elevate This Part Of Your Rap...
Overall Winner : Shotta... You Punches N Creativity Took Care Of This..

Fair Vote, Return Tha Favour..

Mis-Read... Verbal Abuse Had Better Multis... Musta Been Thinkin Bout Sumphin Else My Bad... N No Hate Verbal Abuse That Was A Big Headed Statement How U Said "Im Better Than You" Its Just A Battle Damn Chill...

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Yo VERB
I'm sorry bout runnin my mouth n shit.....
i had no idea you was female...................

but ayeeeyo! you have the cockiest attitude for a chick, very confident in your self too.....
all is good tho, but yeah, i'mz sorry bout runnin my mouth n shit

but upiiinnn yall

Upiin yall, dont sleep on this one

g'luck verb, lol....i had no idea u was female, my bad shorty :(

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Verbal Abuse Gets This......

Dopeman: Ya Flow And Structure Were Off....I Don't Think That Ya Had Any Personals part From The Sig One. Didn't Hit Hard Either. I Thought That Ya Multies Were A lil Forced.

Verbal Abuse: Ya Flow And Structure Was Perfect. A Real Neat Verse. Ya Opener Was Dope... Nice Personal. Sick Metas And Wordplay. Also ya Vocab Was Def Better than Dope's. Nice Closer Personal And Metas.

Basically Verbal Won This Coz Of structure And Flow. And She Had Sick Personals.

Vote:Verbal Abuse

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

I'ma Insert A ''Slug'' InTo Ya ''Dome'' To Get Rid Of The ''Blood Clot''..
This Lil Bitch Wouldnt ''Swing'' A ''Hard'' Punch If I Injected A ''Lead'Shot''..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT NICE SHIT HERE MAYNE GOOD OPENER AND PUNCH



Make Sure I Never Miss A ''Head'Shot'' An My Punches Leave Folk Wantin ''More''...
I'ma Make You Swallow My ''Keys'' To Give U ''Lock'Jaw''...
You Comin Up ''Dumb'' An ''Stuck Behind My Bars'' Thinkin Of Rhymes Doin ''Life With A Pen''..
U Went To Church n The Preacher Said ''Praize The Lord For My Sisters, AMEN''...So U Replied By Whippin Out Ya Dick With A Smile n Preachin ''Heeey Men!''..
^^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCH DECENT ERRR DA FLOW IS AIGHT



Bitch, Your A Closet ''Queer''..
U Called Me Out, Well Next Time I Want A ''Midget'' To ''Interfere'' I'll Holla At ''Gary Coleman''...Ya Hear?!?
Bastard, You Anticpate My ''Texts'' In ''Fear'' Switchin Off Ya ''Screen''...
Cause U Know You Gon Be Left On ''DeathRow'' Like 'EILEEN' (Haha, Eileen In The Sig! not sure how ya spell it tho)
The Only Way This Ever Gon Be A ''Truce'' Is If Ya Get Ya ''Knees Dirty''..
For Comittin ''Verbal Abuse'' You Gon Be Kickin ''Shit'spits'' On 'RV' Until Your At Least ''Thirty''..!!!

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ TIGHT~! NICE PUNCHES AND AIGHT FLOW BUT GOOD WORDPLAYS


SHOTTA-U HAD GOOD PUNCHES (DECENT) AND NICE WORDPLAYS MAYNE

clash hennesy til your dome shook, scatter your figure n chalk your face.
must have his jock misplaced, cause i tossed ya in the basement like office space.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD OPENER NICE PUNCH
LIKED YO STRUTURE AND FLOW MAYNE

only time ya airborn is in a rocket race, stop and trace before ya breath is mine.
i consider you a sketchy affect, cause like christian beliefs...youll be left behind.
leave the rest to crime. praying for positive hope statistics, like ocean thickness.
your just another stomach pain to me, easily fixed like motion sickness.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE MAYNE GOOD FLOW NICE WORD CHOOSIN GOOD PUNCHES

your to doped to get this. rip ya dermis n flesh so ya appear like ripe cherry carnage.
seal you in a color coordinated bin, to specify that your primary garbage.
shotta's rappin produces headaches to the extent kanye forgot his accident.
bites rhymes so frequently, after keying a dopish verse i had to patton it.
who knew what the council was thinkin, your worthless like a stolen accord.
done shot this boy, left you as open wounded n holy as a bullentin board.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WHOA NICE CLOSA MAYNE


AIGHT VERBAL-U HAD GOOD HARD PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW LIKED YO STRUTURE AND WORDPLAYS,,,,,,,AND WORD-CHOOSIN//

MY VOTE GOES TO VERBAL CAUSE HE HAD HARD PUNCHES

SHOTTA-UR GOOD MAYNE U HAD NICE PUNCHES AND WORDPLAYS DA FLOW WAS AIGHT WORK ON DA STRUTURE DA FLOW WILL BE BETTA~!

VERBAL ABUSE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW AND GOOD WORD-CHOOSIN

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Im'a hafta say dope man got this..... his verse came harder in this one.. he had better punches and some nice mettas...

Verbal was pretty good..... i liked it but dope man came harder.....

Hey dopeman .... could you PLEASE!! vote on my battle against AutoMATIK?... please return tha fava dog!!

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Structure - verbal abuse has less stretched lines
punches - verbal abuse' was more damging, and more clever
Wordplay - Verbal abuse had more multies
Flow - Verbal, the multies helped the flow, transition was better.
Overall - Verbal easily takes this, with more complexity and more originality.. i like her style.. Dopeman, you should just work on your flow and structure more, and for this battle, some better punches, but this barley goes to verbal abuse..


Plz return the favor with an honest vote in my battle right here, thx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153028

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dont sleep.........
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