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Voted For: Archeologist
lol...arch...WHOA!!!!! this muhj fucker is loded with punches and tight personals mayne....his structure was was better and his flow was decent...his lines werent so stretched like raphel's and his wordplay was tight...his verse was more interessting...dats y he gets my vote... no hate yo... rtf.... holla |
uppin for votes...
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Archeologist
Why's there a battle in Front Lines..You said it yourself.. Tryed to switch your birth certificate.. ...........Just to make a name for yourself.. ^Nice wordplay. Didnt really see it as a hard hitting punch but more of a hard hitting diss. your on the downhill slope..try's but has nothing but hope.. ..this kid's similae to crack Because.. he used to be dope.. Im batlin a herb, i shud be goin for vets.. its sad to see.. .. You Want an easy win?... then just imagine your me.. ^These right here are lol nice punches. I liked the first 2 but the second 2 wasnt bad at all lol. Your styles antique.. your punches are covered with dust.. Couldnt blow the crowd away.. ......... With a turbine fan and a following gust.. ^This right here was alright but not really hard hitting. Good diss tho Raphael your rare.. maybe even one of a kind.. You Got Owned....ur loss is inevitable., ...As your names and prediction are already underlined.. ^Solid closure right here. last 2 lines were jus ill! Raphael Getting pushy.....pm'ing me to hurry up bout sumthing I wasn't informed about*... Even if you 'punched' me in the 'gut' your 'rhymes' wouldn't make me 'shout'... ^Okay punch. Could have been alot stronger tho. Like damn I got mag 'clips' that'll injure your 'spits' and fragment your 'hips' with 'punches' that'll soften your 'lips'... ^umm really didnt see a punch. Multis and all that shit but no punch. Shit looking at your little avatar would be the only way you'd get flashed... Fuck your 'basic' "punches" couldn't even leave a 'banana bashed'! ^The first line was alright the 2nd line could have been better with a better punch. Like...do you choose random peeps off the site and set up a battle hoping they'll accept and get an easy loss? Like man, I can wipe away 'herbs' like you if I get out my dental floss!! ^First line was aiight the 2nd loss me... I'll 'blow you away' as if I dropped a 'lyrical nuke'... Like an alcoholic starting to puke...you getting 1 vote would be a fluke! ^This was a nice punch right here. First punch in your battle that was tight. Called Archeologist, which means you 'dig up rare bones'... I'll KO U so hard your head'll be left ringing....like ignored telephones!!... This is also a solid closure. The rest of the verse should have been like these last few lines.... oh well |
Fuck sake vote and ill hit your link up.
Pz. |
Vote Fairly and ill hit your link up. Pz. |
Voted For: Archeologist
Getting pushy.....pm'ing me to hurry up bout sumthing I wasn't informed about*... Even if you 'punched' me in the 'gut' your 'rhymes' wouldn't make me 'shout'... ok opener, good wordplay Like damn I got mag 'clips' that'll injure your 'spits' and fragment your 'hips' with 'punches' that'll soften your 'lips'... pretty short bar, nice multies tho Shit looking at your little avatar would be the only way you'd get flashed... Fuck your 'basic' "punches" couldn't even leave a 'banana bashed'! Best punch you got, lol, made me laugh, decent personal too Like...do you choose random peeps off the site and set up a battle hoping they'll accept and get an easy loss? Like man, I can wipe away 'herbs' like you if I get out my dental floss!! major stretched, second line pretty poor, but 1st decent punch I'll 'blow you away' as if I dropped a 'lyrical nuke'... Like an alcoholic starting to puke...you getting 1 vote would be a fluke! nice punch, could do with more syllables in 1st line Called Archeologist, which means you 'dig up rare bones'... I'll KO U so hard your head'll be left ringing....like ignored telephones!!... weak closer, but ok personal IP: Why's there a battle in Front Lines..You said it yourself.. Tryed to switch your birth certificate.. ...........Just to make a name for yourself.. decent opener, nice punch your on the downhill slope..try's but has nothing but hope.. ..this kid's similae to crack Because.. he used to be dope.. Nice punch, good wordplay, kinna good personal i guess Im batlin a herb, i shud be goin for vets.. its sad to see.. .. You Want an easy win?... then just imagine your me.. lol, nice punch Your styles antique.. your punches are covered with dust.. Couldnt blow the crowd away.. ......... With a turbine fan and a following gust.. lmao, that was a good punch, decent in both lines Raphael your rare.. maybe even one of a kind.. You Got Owned....ur loss is inevitable., ...As your names and prediction are already underlined.. good closer, nice punch with decent wordplay Aiight so, Raphael, your lines were pretty stretched and you need a little work on structure cos some bars were kinna wierd. some ok personals, but not that great punches Arch, structure wasn't that great eitehr but punches were good, good use of wordplay, that blow the crowd away line won it for me though. V/ Archeologist |
Voted For: Archeologist
Rapael structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. a few multis.. wordplay was good.. no good punches.. seriously, dental floss?.. nah man.. no good personals.. Archeologist structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay was decent.. most of ur punches connected.. pretty good personals.. Overall Raphael had more multis and better wordplay.. both had a good structure and flow.. Archeologist had more connecting punches, better concepts, and better personals.. so basing off of that.. punches and personals r more important then multis and wordplay so Archeologist gets my vote.. VOTE - ARCHEOLOGIST |
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Multis aint my thing i concentrate on punches. so im going to have to try some. pz. |
i dont think anyone understood the dental floss line...oh well.uppin
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-Uppin Uppin- -We Do Hit Links- -Pz- |
Voted For: Archeologist
close battle Raphael: Multi-city, ok structure, nice flow, good punches, ok personals, ok meta's, could elevate just a lil bit, use harder punches and harder meta's. 6.5/10 Archeologist: ok structure, nice flow, no multi's, hot personals, punches were hitting hard, nice meta's, don't really need to elevate i mean look at ya record. 8/10 no hate to any of ya vote: Arch return the honest votes, battles are in my sig. |
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