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big GZ 09-28-04 02:53 PM

i think both of those votes are gonna be dq'd...but if not its 2-2...uppin 4 votes

Premanition 09-28-04 05:15 PM

uppin............................................. ..........

Premanition 09-29-04 01:49 PM

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Ambient 09-29-04 02:14 PM

Voted For: Premanition

Prem Got This One.........

Big Gz: Ya Structure Was Good. Punches Were Lacking Really. Ya Opener was Pretty Tight n The Second Bar Was Iight Too. But i Think You Dramatically Went Down Hill Afta That. They Jus Wernt Hittin Hard:

ya punching like u "shadow-box" nuthing really hurts me
i'm worry-free...cuz nothing u say is disturbing me
^Just An Example^ Where Was The Diss???

Premanition: Structure Was Good. First Line was A Killa LMAO. Nice Personal; (I Think He Clinched It Wit That Too) Second Bar Was Iight Too. (Nice Meta) I Think That Ya Closer Couldn't Bin Betta Though.

Prem Got This Coz Most Of Bigz Bars Were Missin The Punches

Vote: Premanition

Premanition 09-29-04 05:32 PM

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uppin to finish this shit

big GZ 09-30-04 01:48 AM

^^^i thought u said fuck newbie votes...how funny that when it swings your way its all good...HAHAHAHA!

Premanition 10-01-04 12:45 PM

uppin to finish this shit..............................

Premanition 10-02-04 06:14 AM

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Premanition 10-03-04 07:30 AM

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Premanition 10-04-04 05:31 PM

uppin

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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 10-04-04 05:35 PM

Voted For: big GZ

you already had no respect...didnt think it possible for a deduction....
but you proved me wrong by settin up a battle in emcees introduction....(*)
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH& PERSONAL


ur 'Big?'...well get some liposuction to bring you down to size....
hate nice guys...put my fist to ur face to c some darkness in ya eyes...
^^^^^^^^^^^ AGAIN WIT DEM PERSONALS AND PUNCHES NICE


you battle newbs consistantly...got 5 wins now think u good instantly?...
no honestly ur plain wack...n ur only way out here is to not check in~frankly...
laugh at claims that ur records legit...impossible wiv ur level of wit...
Big all that illustrates to me is a straight jacket is ur daily outfit...
^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD VERSE MAYNE NICE CLOSA U HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES






I’m a real emcee...and u just Webster’s definition
I sense u bout to lose...but thats just my premonition
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD OPENER MAYNE NICE PUNCH


u not fucking wit me...like a bitch wit and STD
but if u do...u know sooner or later...you’ll die eventually
shit gets drastic...but don’t take this loss personally
I rise to the competition...so u bring out the worst in me
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE GOOD FLOW AND NICE PUNCHES



ya punching like u "shadow-box" nuthing really hurts me
i'm worry-free...cuz nothing u say is disturbing me
so when u tryna take "L's" in other words losses
first take this one...and think fast cuz i'm tossing it
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD VERSE HERE


MY VOTE GOES TO BIG GZ CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

PRE-U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS BUT WASNT HITTIN HARD ENOUGH KEEP IT UP THOUGH MAYNE

VOTE-BIG CAUSE OF HARDER PUCHES

YO IAM OUT RETURN AN FAV

Lil-Youngstah 10-05-04 11:40 AM

Voted For: Premanition

I Gotta say both versez were both good both yall did
your thing in your verze
it was a close one though i gotta say this battle
belonged to

premanition
you had a good openin verze
structure good
came hard at da opponent
1 or 2 lines you got weak on but its coo
u did your thing keep at it

big gz no hatin or notin aight just plain honest vote

Premanition 10-05-04 11:54 AM

uppin to finally finish this.........................

Spektikul 10-05-04 01:25 PM

Voted For: Premanition

well, first off i'd like to say, Prem...why you battlin herbs like GZ, haha, jk...I merked him before to, but ima be honest, GZ, you have really elevated since I battled you, keep it up son, I been definatly seein some improvment big time.

Opener - Prem, GZ's was very weak (no real punch)
Closer - GZ, both were kinda weak, but I was really feelin Prems
Punches - Prem, def hit harder than GZ
Personals - Prem, had 2 good ones, GZ didnt use any
Structure - GZ, Prems lines were kinda long which threw off ya flow
Vocab - Prem, althought GZ has been elevating a lot in this area, Prems was just more tech and consistant
metas - Neither had anything great
multies - Prem used quite a few, GZ tried but they were kinda weak attempts

As you can see above^^^ Prem took this one. He had a great opener, both hard punches/personals, Vocab was tech and consistant, and he had lots of multies which added to the his overall performance. GZ, like I said you have been elevating a lot dawg, keep it up. In this battle, you had a good closer, your structure/flow was on, and some of your punches were not too bad, just Prems were harder. Next time try using a better vocab, think of more whitty/creative punches, multies, and use more rhymes that are actually about the person your battling (personals)...Props to both, Prem did a wikked job and GZ is comming along great, payce....


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