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fluidmoon 10-01-04 09:48 AM

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

ok~
verbal:you verse had good flow, the opening bar had a nice effective punch to start this off, some good multies in there as well,nice wordplay in the "bear, thats why left they in hibernation", line was good, you had some good punches towards the end and you kept the momentum, nice job
foto:your verse had the flow, but you lacked in punches and personals, but it wasnt too bad, liked your last line, but i'm going to give this to verbal phenom because of wordplay and vocabulary...




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granmastr chi 10-03-04 08:42 AM

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

This is a one sided battle Verbal takes this on all accounts better punches that hit harder, more personals, and punches were more creative.
Foto your shyt was too basic, elivate a little you'll get there just keep battle'n try and take shit away from every battle.


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