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-..Jono..- 09-28-04 11:07 PM

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HoPe 09-29-04 10:46 AM

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-..Jono..- 09-29-04 03:10 PM

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ight, uppin for feedback along with votes, lets get these battles closed

HoPe 09-29-04 06:52 PM

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-..Jono..- 09-29-04 07:28 PM

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uppin, lets get some adequete feedback and votes.........

HoPe 09-30-04 12:12 AM

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HoPe 09-30-04 10:04 AM

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Master Minded 09-30-04 03:42 PM

This was feedback posted for HoPe
 
I think hope one, not just cuz she in my crew, it was good by both, but hope put her heart into this, I felt the empotion, Jono too, but not as much, it sounded like a Tupac song, and didnt sound like a topical battle about the last thing you said, overall tho, good by both pc

fluidmoon 09-30-04 04:05 PM

Voted For: HoPe

wow~great topical both, nice job
hope~your verse had some great descriptive vocabulary here, nice flow, stayed on topic and i liked how it tied in towards the end, the imagery in your words was great, i could picture this as i was reading it...and it was well set up......great job
jono~you had good flow and some nice vocabulary too, some multies in there and the rhymin was great, but i think hope took this with the imagery and storyline, the topic was captured better, but nice job as well.....




Return the favor................

HoPe 09-30-04 10:54 PM

lol thanx fluid!!! uppin for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abraxas 10-02-04 02:52 PM

This was feedback posted for HoPe
 
bump... easy win you tok it on hope now i know you really ingenius mind....

HoPe 10-02-04 08:22 PM

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Parallel 10-03-04 10:53 PM

Voted For: HoPe

Hope:
lol hope is way better she or he i belive its a she so im gonna say she sry if its wrong but anyway you came harder yer a fuckin vet gurl but you need some vocabulary i dont see to many vets with vocab it makes me noshesh seen that they dont have any like yer vets come on....

Jono:
k no hate but that was hilarious i couldent stop laugh about how much you lacked flow and stucture and everything else like hope just came out and KOed you what were you thinkin not tryin? cuz i would tryed against a vet lol

VOTE: Hope

return the favour in my battle verse Net links in the sig aight peace

HoPe 10-04-04 01:42 AM

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