Voted For: Notorious Verses

yo i think NV takes this....cos first of all he hd more lines...so...more space for a better verse....he had harder punches wordplay and personals were tight...structure and flow were just a lil off..but mayne ya verse had all what it takes to win this...certifiedthug....yo no hate but ur verse was wackkkkkkkkkk....sturcture was off...no flow..no hard punches no decent personals...NOTHING!!!...i just think you have to elevate...NV takes this for a more complete verse...


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Voted For: Notorious Verses

aight oyu got this vote cuz you had better wordplay and an okay flow but some stuff didnt seem to rhyme but certifiedthug had a weak verse you had harder punches and better structure

thug-you went easy on him i guess cuz your verse lacked your wordplay was grade skewl man work on that and punches werent that hard hittin and personals lacked structure was okay flow wasnt that great

v/notorious verses

Voted For: Notorious Verses

*cough*cough*
this a one-sided
one who did everything right
and one who did everythign wrong

Verses:
you had some very nice flow
I read your verse with eas and not having to stop
your structure was easy on my eyes
you punches were nice but some weren't insulting
him and more at what you used for wordplay
like the philly line
ut it was still nice


Thug
your lines were very short
so flow was off teribly
and punches were basic and so was ur voacb
and al the verse was painfullybad

vote/Notorious Verses

Voted For: Notorious Verses

yo my vote has to go to---- notorius
that other kid really needs to eleavate! I really don't know how to break this one down---iight I'll try
Vocb. - notorius
Flow- notorius
stu. - Notorius
word play- notorius
naf said................
WELL THAT WAS SIMPLE WHY MY VOTE IS THE WAY IT IS!

Voted For: Notorious Verses

^you should watch ur wordiness cuz it can throw off ya flow.... but nice opener, the closer was nice but doesn't rhyme..

best lines:
I Spit Hardcore And Reel At All Times, But My Flow Is Flexible
I See U From Philly But Like Da Teams Dere, Dawg U Neva Successful
^lol nice job... lol

Certified's best happened to be:
see man u try ta act hard wit ya record of 0 n 1/
man as u kan see u jus a straight bum/
^not bad the only tru personal....... i see ya elevatin' ya verse... nice job..

I picked Notorious cuz he came harder with punches had the more creative touch in his verse.. nice wordplays some decent metas....... he had the better opener and closer and his vocab was really good........ y'all both gotta work on structure sum what... and certified u need to make ur verse a lil' complex or put sumthin' creative within it...... good luck with this, nice battle you two.. but Notorious got this battle easily..

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