fo real son thats a positive attitude :thumbup: keep doin ya thing.. practice make perfect

Voted For: SubtleTee

Subtle Tee wins this hands down with wayy better wordplay and personals and harder hitting punchees than 40.
40,your verse was basic and elementary-like.Work on upping your structure and wordplay.Try also to throw some personals in there.

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Voted For: 40Cal

yo yall need to elevate i meen relle elevate, get yall punches up and come up wit betta wordplay(no hate)

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Bumping for some explained votes. Get with it people.

Voted For: SubtleTee

Can’t son a bitch, man I’ll daughter this nun. I’ll straight up slaughter you son./
I’m so whack? When this cat packs the same “caliber” as plastic water guns?/

Worthless! You’re expendable bra, my lines ill, I’ll just stay dependably raw!/
Fuck a wolf! My lines slice jaws and leave an MC cut up like extendable claws!/

Bout to get ~wrecked, damn~, already had a battle but you didn’t ~check fam~/
Quitting is the ~best plan~, because you’re about to lose, just like ~X, man~!/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW AND GOOD PERSONALS KEEP IT UP MAYNE



Be “Subtle” while I “Tee” off and bang ya moms in tha cock//
Yer as ferocious as vanilla ice and tha new kids on tha block//

40cal claps lungs wit his lyrical guns causin ya breathin to stop//
People treat ya albums like newly caught fish kuz they ready to flop//

U real baby like playin around wit mic’s as if they were rattles//
Jot this down as a loss on ya record and for everytime that we battle//


^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT MAYNE GOOD SHIT HERE NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WASNT ENOUGH TO KNOCK SUB OFF DA ROPES//
ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES OK PERSONALS ELEVATE ON THAT TOO
DEN U ALRIGHT

~PEACE~ SUB RETURN AN FAV (HONEST VOTE)

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not bad ill like to see our battle cause this is a really nice one looved it


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158115

Voted For: SubtleTee

ok you won

punches tee hit harder
multis tee the only ones i saw
enjoy tee alot funner to read
won tee

Voted For: SubtleTee

wack battle but sub was hotter flow punches and personals were hot but the style was wack.