Voted For: oreo

this was fresh and pretty hott.... considerin that 8 bars is 16 linez....butt the thought process was hott good battle

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Voted For: surgical

i thought that Surgical took this because his punches seemed to work out a lot more and the flow, although it fell off at times i felt it was just overall batter than the other dudes stuff... good punches they were a lot more on target and just struck your opponent harder.. good job to the both of you but inmy eyes i though that Surgical just had the better overall verse... so as i thought this my vote goes to him, again good job to the both...

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Voted For: oreo

i vote for oreo because he wrote less and it was better than surgical and he wrote a paragraph

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Voted For: surgical

ok surgical structure is ok a little streched in some places ok flow a good vocab now to where you lacked cain and ablel aint die out cain was cursed to walk the earth forever in the land of cain anyways punches aint hit but were ok disses were weak work on those and you will be much better a 5/10
oreo good structure and flow i like how your madd active and battle alot you will get better nut your punches are weak and disses too plus you need better wordplay your verse lacks because of that and makes you lose a 4/10

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Voted For: surgical

i think that surgical had better vocab in this one and more punches. oreo u had some better punches but when u do the math it kinda evens out. but i gotta say that surgical gets this one. it was really close though.

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Voted For: oreo

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best-oreo

oreo:
he had little pucnhes wasnt all to good but they were ok
other guy:
his verse didnt quite make to much sence hispunches didnt rly land
oreo wins pz

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