uppuin............................................ .....

Voted For: Krown the King

the king got this hands down
much more complex verse............
better punches, better flow, better personals, just everythin about it was hotter...
maybe the structure could improve? but still, hands down this should be a k.o in your favor...

return the vote in one of my battles

p e a c e

uppin............................................. ...........

Voted For: Krown the King

yo smak ya face n put it in mud this is gonna be good
ur like a gay hood lookin like shit not mud
break u nose n u playin with ur hoes n those
no1 like u with u old n manky toes
this is a ounches ill break u jaw so u cant munch
i wish u wud die go to hell n tel u got a punch
to ya face u a disgrace to this rappers race
u like mase shit as im gonna win i rest my case
die die die u gonna get ripped thats no lie
u fuckin cunt u need a broken bck n i *
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT "OK" PUNCHES GOOD FLOW DIDNT SEE AN PERSONALS


gotta 'unleash~wrath' to a white bitch w/ blue 'eyes' and brown hair/
when i spread my 'dieses~fast', what if he 'dies'? would any1 even care?/
remember vanilla 'ice' no1 cared when he left, it will 'happen' to this "mental" pateint/
should have thought 'twice' b4 fightin da king now im 'snappin',
shit, this "kid" life is wasted/
from the squiggly in his 'name' to hide 'shame' of his scrambled words hes "calls~a~verse"/
decision was made from first 'line' if first 'time' he found out when he "fall~it~hurts"/
look motha fucka, you got to understand that my lyrics got lil jon yellin ohh~kay/
"ohh cheer up, but you shold quit becuz next to me youd neva be famous someday"/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK VERSE "OK" PUNCHES NICE FLOW NO PERSONALS

V-KROWN THE KING CAUSE OF HARDER FLOW

BOTH OF YOU HAD WEAK PUNCHES NO PERSONALS I DECIDED TO VOTE ON FLOW AND MORE COMPLEX VERSE WHICH KROWN THE KING HAD~!

MENTAL KID- WORK ON SOME PUNCHES GET MORE CREATIVE AND FLOW USE PERSONALS ELEVATE ON DEM THINGS "OK"

V-KROWN THE KING CAUSE OF HARDER FLOW AND MORE COMPLEX

~PEACE~