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Ice Pick 10-05-04 11:05 AM

CAUSE YOUR WACK

HAVE NO TALENT AND NO IDEA WHAT A PERSONAL OR WORDPLAY IS

HER SHIT=

well i wont even go there

She got some skills but lost here

SKANO

I aint seen your shit but im judging you uskc since you havnt posted your verse yet and if you did, learn how to post it cause the thread is empty......

LIL KID

skano 10-05-04 11:10 AM

maybe you want to read the rules befor you speak, he is supposed to
drop 1st then i will drop, yet i dont see his verse so im not dropping and
wasting my time on that kid, till he drops im not droping...


lil kid.

Yvonne 10-05-04 11:35 AM

*fuckin hell i thought battlin vets woulda been a gd shit....full of maturity...b4,durin and after the battle...but i guess i was wrong....smfh*











uppin

Yvonne 10-05-04 11:36 AM

and yeah sorry i changed my sig...i just had to in remembrance of my homie....



its true my sig had even and dmx in it....

Mad Dog 10-07-04 09:29 AM

Voted For: Judge & Jury

King Solo

Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
/\ nice opener good punch on this one

Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
/\ again good bar liked the DMX bit think i know why and good play off the name

My kills just be one below 100 cuz I roll packin double “nines”
Only thing u bustin is my gut with them corny ass cheddar “rhymes”
/\ 1st line self-G blah 2nd line nice punch an aight diss but could be betta

Yvonne cud be hot news and still wudn’t hit the “prime-time”
Understand real rhythm, I speechmark each time I “rhyme-lines”
/\ 1st line nice punch but endin it wit a self-G line na sry

Overall 7/10 King Solo i know ur abilities even though this was keystyle i seen u do much betta

Yvonne

You pussy nigga taking too much confidence thinking u good
dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
/\ Nice opener nothin original though

dis dude still countin his abc..what u know about the jury?*
the only place you get buck in rappin is right down the nusery
/\ nice punch steady diss

he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
/\ not really feelin this bar

i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #
/\ Self-G line no real diss sry coulda came betta specially for a closer

Overall 6.5/10: Yvey_Yvey sorry girl u had sum aight punches and some good wordplay but i think u still need a lil work on them some more...ur structure and flow however was real good...as was Solo's but i think u need more consistancy Yvey

V/Solo

Ill-Grammatix 10-10-04 05:03 PM

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 
YVEY YVE!!!... just checking out the stats and shyt and seeing if ya still elevating and shyt...lol... don't wanna vote cuz peops will think i'm being biased cuz of our history in KK...GL shorty

TitoBronsky 10-10-04 05:45 PM

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153382

HottnessDefined 10-12-04 06:05 AM

Voted For: Judge & Jury

king got diz far more better verse i liked da punchez an disses yvonne u r whakked ur verse didnt hav good disses u need 2 2 werk on punchez

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Yvonne 10-15-04 10:02 AM

thanx ILL-Grammatix...

:wtf: @ titobronsky............Vote for vote....feedbak for feedbak...choose!!!


hottness defined...learn to vote....kid!!...


uppin this...votes shall be returned honestly....

BkBrawla 10-16-04 09:02 AM

Voted For: Judge & Jury

You pussy nigga taking too much confidence thinking u good
dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
^^^^^^^^^^^ DAT WAS WACK~! GOOD FLOW BUT NOT AN STAND OUT PUNCH FOR AN OPENER//



dis site is full of lil kids you shuda kept ya wack spit to ya hood
dis dude still countin his abc..what u know about the jury?*
the only place you get buck in rappin is right down the nusery
he got his ass broke in 9 good times and still askin 4 mo**
tinks 2 b a vet,yeah by battlin a N.O with a No-Show***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AGAIN NICE FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES ARE NOT HITTIN IT AND PLUS THERE AINT STANDIN OUT USE MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES 'OK"


i needed a place to lay my ass and let my flows drop****
now open ur mouth as i win..to compensate i say props #
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ERRRR OK DA CLOSA WAS KINDA OFF TO ME AFTA I READ DA EXPLAINATION ITS STILL IS

YVONNE-U HAD OK PUNCHES BUT WERENT ALL THAT GREAT NICE FLOW GOING NICE USIN PERSONALS AND PUNCHES BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN IT I'LL GIVE U PROPS GOING AGAINST KING SOLO THOUGH


Sayin ure battles get slept on, reason is cuz u “spit wack”
MC’s read the first line of ure verse and then “click back”
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE OPENER GOOD DECENT PUNCH


Ure sig becomes relevant cuz u know this the EVE of ure “loss”
U (D)yin (M)erked (X)tra strong, u just been killed by the “boss”
My kills just be one below 100 cuz I roll packin double “nines”
Only thing u bustin is my gut with them corny ass cheddar “rhymes”

^^^^^^^^^^^^AIGHT GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW NICE USIN PERSONALS DA PUNCHES WERE DECENT AND REALLY STANDIN OUT



Yvonne cud be hot news and still wudn’t hit the “prime-time”
Understand real rhythm, I speechmark each time I “rhyme-lines”
^^^^^^^^^^^ WORD NICE CLOSA GOOD FLOW AND DECENT PUNCH

KING SOLO-U HAD WORDPLAYS PERSONALS AND PUNCHES I FELT U CAME MORE HARDER DAN YVONNE CAUSE DA PUNCHES WERE MORE DECENT AND REALLY STAND OUT

^^^^^^^^^ THATS WHY I VOTED FOR KING SOLO

RETURN AN FAV KING

For$akeN 10-20-04 02:44 PM

This was feedback posted for Judge & Jury
 
just checkin' out the polls.......................and uppin:thumbup:


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