uppin......theres prolly only ice pick who gets the punches........up this shit...

uppin this shit.....................................

uppin yall.................

Voted For: Assasin

yo i think you won this one in by a few cats actually everything but punches if that give you an idea

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Voted For: Assasin

this verse was the best it had the best punches I really like this verse very much because of them they were just on top. Some nince flow there to and inners good opener and nice closer over all 9/10 The other verse wasn't good man it had really bad wording and alot of dum played stuff not good flow at all ima have to give u 4/10.

thats no hate vote bitch ur verse sucked..........

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Verbal Phenom


Kid Ya Can't Battle With The King of Verbs, Losing Isn't An Option
Alias Demonstrates Ya Lyrics Must Suck Being Named Afta A Condom*
(ok opener not the best)

Battle Is Only One Round Like Writers Block Yall Never Make Round 2**
Respect Is Out Of The Question... Asking Newbs To Join Ya Crew?!?
(ok but really no punch)

Your Future Is Dim And Hard To See Like A Dark Room With No Lighting
Change Ya Name To Parrana Coz Every "Line" He Sees He Sure To B Biting
(nothing but a little bit of a pernosal)

This Dogs About To Be "Put Down" Coz everytime You Drop We Consider
It "Foul"
U Winning Is Doubtful So Do What America Did To Saddam And Hand In The
Towel
(not a bad closer but you need to explane your last line)


Assasin

ill leave ya lookin like a smurf..blue in the face..stuck for words while ya choke...
gettin ya ass smoked by me is the only way u'll know wot its like to be dope...
(good opner and you had a good punch in there)

this fag aint sick,the only time he flowz heavy is when he bleeds...
he has to put dick in his mouth an swallow cum in order to 'succ seed'...
(ok punch buta little bit nasty with the dick in the mouth and cum seed)

i leave ya paralized,crutches be the only bit of metal u be packin...
ya tht whack,ya come last place at the paralympics rappin...
(good pounch in that line wit the parlized and crutches)

verbal phenom spits rhymes more played thn lines from shakespeare scripts...
you could write ya whole verse in braille and we still wouldnt feel it...
(best punch in ya whole verse in bouth of those lines)

its only right tht i acknowledge ya for tryin,we cant all have dope skillz when
we write...u could compress ya whack lines together and they still wouldnt be tight...
(nice closer had a little bit of meaning to it)

so as you can see Assasin won it because of poor a poor opponet

return the favor boys and gurls

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

verbal lol dope opener here the vocab and flow good as fukc as weel as the disses also good shit punches were dope as fuck and won you this battle 8/10
assasin dope structure was kinda streched here punches were not as good as verbals but decent they hit disses were good too vocab nice as weel as flow if your punches were stronger you wouldve won this but he just outclassed you with punches7/10

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

i vote for verb cuz had a good structure
i gie the flow to assassain thogh,
but verb had some good punches and had the opener
assasian had the closer though
over all verb was better

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Voted For: Assasin

all in all i think that assasin had better punches and vocab. but verbal took flow. soo im gonna have to say assisan took this one.

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