uppin please! im workin on the chorus and he 2nd n 3rd verses. hoppefully i can record it eventually.... its now titled, though, however, possibly not perminently, "Just Fuck It" uppin!

uppin 4 feedback please ASAP!!!

Please Read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was pretty good it had some good lines in it keep it up

*scared shes gonna cut my balls off,runs away*

lol. aight, i wanna hear more feedback so uppin!!!!

When I was young, My mom said "If you dont have something nice to say then dont say nothing"


*Says Nothing*
-Leaves Thread-

oh, so u startin that shit now? well, everybody else seems 2 think its pretty good.... mayb 7 or 8 ppl r just lying 2 me then.... i dont know.... :cussing:

i like that shit... good stuff... very good structure.. over all flow was on target and i was feelin the topic... good stuff... im glad you decided to elevate instead of leave RV... i remember your "good bye" post... you have shown improvement already... keep elevating.... i see your posting in the free agent forum... i see your on the rise and i got a spot for you in 50th brigade if you want it... you would be our 2nd femcee. if so let me know.. peace

sounds good. i got 2 tryout or summin?

ok, ok, ok, lets git sum fedback up in here!!!

Sup ma yeah I was feeling that you know funny shit their, don't worry bout
wreckage he's kool.

You come well hot in this cuting dicks off and shit haha. I not gonna get you
mad.

Peace nice verse

1~

come by the 50th brigade forum... go to tryouts and drop this song as your tryout... you will be accepted, im the leader and tecknequess is the co leader... re rollin 16 deep, soon to be 17 so come on in and drop this song as ya tryout verse!

did it, done....

aight, uppin 4 feedback ppl!!!

pleeeeaaaasssse post feedback!!! i need sum critics up in here

shit was aight....up your vocab though............