Voted For: J-Will

i vote for jwill cuz he took this battle the hole way his structer was alittle off but his wordplay was iight vocab was good punches was on point not jwill best of battles
skano ur was doin ur thing but u didnt write enough
next time write more
honest vote
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Voted For: skano

Lol..

Jay:That shit was dumb wack, your like a generic Cassidy...your punches were weak as fuck, and you kept talking in your verse and splitting the shit up...shits gay...dont do that ever again. And then the structure...gay...go look at other battles to see what type of structure you should use.

skano: Ok, i liked the 'phone line' line, and the paper cut was witty...you had harder hitting punches, the verse was less boring and the structure was actually readable...so vote.

Skano

Voted For: skano

Vote: skano, both came wack, but he had some wittier things in his verse, so basically, he just takes it. i was close tho, both were wack.

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Voted For: skano

skano
good structure.. flow was on target.. no multis.. dope wordplay.. dope concepts.. most of ur punches connected.. no personals..

J-Will
wack structure.. like, all of ur lines were stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. good multis.. decent wordplay.. bad concepts.. they werent original at all.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
J-Will had more multis.. neither had good personals.. skano had the better structure.. the better flow.. the better wordplay.. the better concepts, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. skano gets my vote..

VOTE - SKANO

Voted For: skano

i liked Skano's verse A LOT more, the other kids concepts were so old and played and just everything, i have no idea how he even competes with this, good job to the both of you but Skano CLEARLY took this i mean the other kids structure was just terrible you need to fix that and your punches were the same too, good job to the both but Skano took this due to punches and structural differences..

v/ Skano

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i think yall niggaz need to elevate cuz yall rappin is SHIT(no hate)
but yall do need to eleveate yall game

Voted For: skano

ha ha
punches-skano
pers-none
met-none
mul-none
stukta-skano
skano won his punches actuly land the other guy was 100%wack ha ha that guy got beat by a 100% newb ta ha he kicked ur ass
pz

Voted For: skano

skano owned jwill cause he ad better wordplay and punches in his verse.J's verse had a bizzare tructure and his wordplay was very basic with nothing complex to it.It made it even more boring to read when you added the .... and the "'s and all the elementar vocab in your verse.
skano,you came pretty hard even though you half assed(if its true).You pretty much won with your first bar wich was witty and original.J will,elevate with your punches and your vocab.
V/skano
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