upin yall
dont sleep...........
we need us some votes an honest ones will be returned

Upin this battle yall, dont sleep, an honest votes WILL BE RETURNED

Voted For: Dopeman

chekin polls... nice drop from tha both of yall...

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^^Dq That Vote That Was Supposed To Be FeedBack...

can we get some honest votes yall, they will be returned if yas leave a damn link

lol what was ut hinkin dia? haha, upppin yall......

Voted For: Dopeman

DopeMan
um shotta had weak stucture but he had nice punches...a few vocabulary not bad verse orgainize yer stucture adn flow dawg...then you'll be fuckin dope man...word...yuo won easly tho dice was also off on stucture but you were closer and dice flowed better but you still had better punches...

Dice:
you had an aight verse not good enough to win tho...you had flow..better flwo then shotta but yer sturucture was way off...man...trey fix that add some vocab in derr you would be dope dawg...make yer punches better to eleavate realy thatsall to say...

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Voted For: Dopeman

both were pretty wack, spits Dopeman's lines were too stretched and dice's didnt flow very well in this battle. But ima have to give this battle to Dopeman cuz he had punches that actually hit even if they were not very hot n didnt hit hard. Dice def won on multies but his spit didnt really flow or rhyme well to me.
holla at the kid

yo uppin yall, can we get some votes?
honest votes will be returned

sleeping is very bad...
''but i'm tired tho'' (j-kwon sorta intro, ya know?)
ha
i'm bored
yo upppin

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Voted For: Dopeman

that screen contrast line was pretty ill. u had sum pretty good wordplay. nice job

dice, summa ur shit didnt even rhyme, still good, but felll apart at sum points so my vote goes 2 dopeman

Voted For: Dopeman

props to both battlists but here's the verdict

flow:dopeman
vocab:dopeman
punches:dopeman
structure:dice
Hunger:dopeman
verdict:dice, this verse seemed either like a rush job, or your hunger for a win was on zero. Which even though you won last time, i don't respect, every battle should have you hungry, and this verse lacked true effort.
feeding and feasting does not rhyme sir.
mattress does not rhyme with my class
'tress does not rhyme with class.
You MUST at least rhyme, and you lost huge points for this. Huge points.

dopeman-i sensed a huge amount of hunger in this one, which i and many others respect a lot. I can tell you really went at it with him, which showed in the fact that you had a lot more punches.

this aint no beef, cause i know your addicted to my 'Lines' like naomi campbell!

that was a nice closer. But there is definate room for improvement, many of the punches lacked power, they were light jabs, but strong enough to score you the win in the end.