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eph 10-06-04 08:10 PM

Voted For: lyric

openers and closures do it for me:

auto: ya had good punches, nice punches. but the thing is they werent perosnals for the most part, ya blind spittin...literally. nice wrodplay and vocab, but ya closure was either too complex for me or just didnt have any sort of rhyme scheme. good luck next time.

lyric: ya had decent punches, not as good as auto's but your punches turned out to be perosonals as well, ya have nice flow, ya rhymes seem to be perfect length, but ya need some mulits, vocab, or wordplay to add some flavor to ya self. congrats with this one, ya verse was decently good, but ya closure was fire, thats why ya gettin the vote..

please hit up a vote in the link, an honest vote will be appreciated.

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 10-06-04 10:52 PM

lets get this closed huh? ....yup

Mistic-Rogue 10-07-04 01:57 AM

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

AutoMATIK™ wins this, much better verse overall,

i felt that AutoMATIK™ punches were hard and hit better
Punches to AutoMATIK™

Flow from both sides was nice but AutoMATIK™ wins!
flow was consisant all throughout and your verse had nice structure!

AutoMATIK™ your verse was pretty funny, and it wasnt boring!

good battle from both sides, please return the favour and post and honest vote, thx

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 10-07-04 02:34 AM

Flow from both sides was nice but AutoMATIK™ wins!
flow was consisant all throughout and your verse had nice structure!

lol at flow and structure in a text battle

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 10-07-04 02:27 PM

vote please .

Kawn Flixx 10-07-04 08:32 PM

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

*cough*
one sided battle really

no ofense dawg
but lyrics so verse was terrible dawg
you didn't really use punches
and your vocab was just bad
rhymes sceme was basic also
that budget line was just bad

Matik-
this wasn't the best I seen from you
but it was still good, It had actual disses
and flow was nice too

my fav lie was the closer

SIK

vote Automatik

pc

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 10-07-04 08:39 PM

^your jus too stupid to get my punches...everyline was a punch..with worplay and wit...you obviously didn't get the budget line so let me explain it to you

He payed his ghostwriter too much..so he can't budget
He can't throw his verse at me, cause he's too weak to budge-it

Wordplay moron

Kawn Flixx 10-07-04 08:43 PM

nigga

you had too many fillers damn

I can't even vote honestley?

sorry I aint dickride you

you rhymed "fuck it"
with "budget"
multis are ice but ithas to MEAN something

damn nigga
you up for votes but get pissed when they aint for you

damn moron

AutoMATIK™ 10-07-04 08:45 PM

hahah ... uppin this shit ...

Deliquint 10-07-04 08:52 PM

Voted For: AutoMATIK™



IP:

Your shits all played and old school, It's sad this loser stuck wit this fate
Cause sending yourself valentines, is the last time you had an up-date

^an ight bar but i saw the connection wit valentine and up-date

You payed your ghostwriter too much, now you in debt but fuck it
How you gonna throw a verse at me, when you can't even budget
^jus a filler

Comin at me on AIM, desperately begging me to get in my crew
When-you-write-like "this and" still say that your "not-a-newb"

^best line in ya rap

but the filler line messed ya shit up plus u need to make ya shit more complex thats how Automatik took dis battle

holla


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