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Voted For: Empire

Ok, I'm not gonna waste my time breakin' it down because Infector's lines were hella stretched and I know you kids don't like reading long posts. Infecotr, that's your main flaw, so work on shortening your lines down. Other than that you had some good multis, but your punches were lacking. But that can only be improved by elevation so I won't hate. Empire your lines were a little stretched too but not too much. You came with hella mutlis and had some pretty good punches in there too. I was feelin' the "crossed out" line too, that was the highlight in my opinion. So yeah, Infector you just need some elevatin' and I ain't tryin' to hate but it word...
V//Empire

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This was feedback posted for Empire
 

we in same crew...and i want free money what a coincidence!

Voted For: Empire

you actually showed a good verse.... nice shit..
you won bcuz you had a way stronger verse though ya punches were nto as good but still killled that other guy

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