Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

Big papa good shit man i remember you way back u defintly a vet at this site and i can see youve really elevated since back then i like the punches and real good word play i dont like how u stretchin ya bars man shorten them up its ckilling ur verse Good shit tho u still won this

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uppin this shit................1 more vote needed, lets hear ya people

Voted For: intensify effect

wow... I.e. I was feeling that....
great job...

you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee...
you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker )
~that was funny shit right there....lol
Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'....
Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'....
~LMAO... sorry that was just 2 fetti
im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic..
on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha*
~Alright...
kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace..
why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee...
~Eh... again... average...
It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder...
Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders...
~Better...
Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ...
Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'....
~Excellent closer

7.3/10

Okay... big pappa... you talked way too much about him ducking and I really didn't think that verse was too great... definately not your best. you need more personals than just him ducking... it's about a 5.8/10... really... I expected better. Good battle... stay up.

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

okay break down....

Personalz - Pappa (tha duckin dissez got it)
Punchez - Pappa (personalz helped wit this)
Structure - Pappa (easy 2 read more matchin then effect)
Flow - Pappa (structure helped wit this)
Multiz - Effect (pappa didn't realli have none)

pretty one sided pappa got this at least i think so

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upp'in for more votes..............................

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

juss checkin the polls n stuff....................

what is this fuckin shit? this was closed 2 days ago... what the fuck?

Voted For: intensify effect

Easy battle to judge...

Its "intence" how my rhymes "efect" ya brain waves
nigga this shits gonna leave you scard and fucked up fo' dayz

ehhh...ok opener... nuffin special

lil faggot ducked when he repped violent type
he was scared of 50th brigade and couldnt live up to his hype

cool personal... stay on him

just anotha bitch made nigga who thinks he can flow
fuckin homo cant even come close to my shit and thats fo sho

pointless... filler line w/self glorification

intensify we know you a fag, your emotions run softly
nigga when you took this battle you should have known it was gonna be costly

no punch... 2nd time ya called him gay already

Intensifyin your effect wont even help you now cuz this shits about done
this niggas on tha run, his tail between his legs, you just a bitch son

a little stretched here... used the play on his name in ya opener in pretty much the same way

aint even got tha balls to stay in violent type when he made himself a fool
been duckin me for weeks nigga and now you layin in tha "dead pool"

already told us he ducked you... that all you got on him?

bitch after this shit our beef will be clean, its all good
cause i know you gonna be to scared to fuck wit me again in my own hood

blah...filler

played ass bitch imma bring it straight old school to end this shit illa
nigga FUCK YOU and you just been MURDAD by tha real lyrical rhyme killa!!!

weak closer... second bar was ya best... everything fell short after that

IE:

you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee...
you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker )

lol...funny....nice opener...a lil stretched but effective

Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'....
Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'....

lol again... dry humping... not the most original but it's still some funny shyt

im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic..
on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha*

ehhh..ok... no personals so far.. just disses

kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace..
why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee...

blah!... weak bar here

It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder...
Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders...

ok... nothing spectacular

Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ...
Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'....

nice closer... effective use of multies... nice wordplay... whole verse shoulda hit like this (add some personals next time!)

ok this is bull shit... this battle was over... i won... thats it... i had the win on my record and now its re opend and im losing? what the fuck is this shit? i mean IE is aight with me, he is now in my crew and were cool but this is some bull shit... im not happy about this shit at all

Voted For: intensify effect

effect wun diz battl he had bettr flow i likd hiz flow it wuz hot wit dem disses an punchlines he cum much stronger den bigpappa in dis battle, pappa need 2 improve on disses

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upp'in this battle for the final vote..................

Voted For: intensify effect

BigPappa76

Its "intence" how my rhymes "efect" ya brain waves
nigga this shits gonna leave you scard and fucked up fo' dayz
self-glory no comment

lil faggot ducked when he repped violent type
he was scared of 50th brigade and couldnt live up to his hype
nice personal good diss

just anotha bitch made nigga who thinks he can flow
fuckin homo cant even come close to my shit and thats fo sho
weak punch and weak rhyme

intensify we know you a fag, your emotions run softly
nigga when you took this battle you should have known it was gonna be costly
nice diss not really a punch but good rhyming


Intensifyin your effect wont even help you now cuz this shits about done
this niggas on tha run, his tail between his legs, you just a bitch son
lol @ this line i found it funny and yet it ain't? lol anyway i liked it

aint even got tha balls to stay in violent type when he made himself a fool
been duckin me for weeks nigga and now you layin in tha "dead pool"
More personal there an aight rhyme good diss

bitch after this shit our beef will be clean, its all good
cause i know you gonna be to scared to fuck wit me again in my own hood
filler really no diss jus rhyming really

played ass bitch imma bring it straight old school to end this shit illa
nigga FUCK YOU and you just been MURDAD by tha real lyrical rhyme killa!!!
nice flow for the closer there no punch and a lil self-glory

intensify effect

you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee...
you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker )
nice opener a good punch there although it's a lil played

Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'....
Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'....
damn good punch nice diss and flowed well

im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic..
on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha*
nice diss and rhyming good flow again

kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace..
why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee...
lol @ this line good again

It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder...
Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders...
LMAO nice punch specially the 2nd line

Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ...
Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'....
Nic closer a couple of multies punch included flowed well damn good verse

v/I.F purely because yall both came hard at each other but BIGPAPPA76 was lacking 1 thing...punches...and dawg it's essential that you use them because it's the main part of a battle and if you don't use them u will lose battles like this which you could've easily used and i think if you did use punches...the result would've been very different