Uppin this battle for these cats


Hey guys return the favor on my battles if u would...Just peep it honestly....

-Wreckage-

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Woah For A Newb.. Your Pretty Good....
I'd Voet But I'm Too Lazy

Voted For: The Disciple

aiight here's the breakdown.

Disciple, nice verse, man. Although that boldin' the shit, gets fuckin' annoyin'. lol But punches were pretty nice. I loved yo closer. Tight shit. Keyboatd, weerd. Your flow was pretty nice too. But I felt it went off in a FEW spots. Not bad though. tight verse.

.com, you remind me of someone, don't kno who. But anyways, your structure was much better than TD's. But yo punches didn't hit as hard as his did in my opinion. They were aiight, but some really didn't hit that hard. Flow was nice though. Bout the same wit TD's. nice verse

Overall, though, I think TD took it. It was close, but punches outweighed it. pc

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm alias...................................?
not here for voting................

OMFG.....someone for on this damn battle......uppin..

Voted For: The Disciple

nice verse disciple you had good personals and i liked your verse very much...

opener:disciple
closure disciple
multies:disciple
punches: disciple
personals: .com
flow:.com
Structure: disciple

ok nice battle .com you had good personals but disciples multies murked you now hate...

return the favour links in the sig...

peace!

Voted For: The Disciple

Wow...I see why he calls himself The Disciple...It looks like he had the fuckin power of God in this verse...shit was holy...HOLY SHIT!! Disciple came with the metas, the punches, the flow, the punches, the wordplay, and the punches...YOU KILLED IT DAWG...not a wack line in ya whole verse....com your verse was aight, but you need to come up with more punches and not say the same thing over and over again (you kept talkin about the name Disciple)...and to be honest, ya verse wasnt that hard...it flowed well, which is a plus, but it lacked what battles need the most...the punches...so just keep at it and elevate...no hate dawg so dont get nuthin twisted aight? But my vote goes to Disciple...We're not worthy!!!