uppin on votes ppl get at this battle so we can leave it in dust already

uppin for votes yall get at this right here

Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

disciple got this his verse wuz tight he had dem hot azz punches so he gets my vote yo

uppin on votes get at this battle right here mayn .......

This was feedback posted for Lyrical Disciple
 

wanted to see who actually won sorry...............

Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

death's lines were first off way to long but i did like how death knew about his opponent, but his lines were not very clean and structured. the dumbass fan line and the newstand line i wasnt feelin at all.

lyric's lines were nicely structured and clean very undersandable and i liked how he used the priceless sex against death, read deaths profile if you dont get it, both ddiidnt use complexe rhymes most of it was simple.... collars and dollars......
tuff and ruff so on same with death........dough and know.....crew and knew.
this goes to lyrics

This was feedback posted for Lyrical Disciple
 

nice** chicking pools, lyrical i think you one

Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

lyrical got this, much more enjoyable verse
better personals an puns an i could actually read his verse

death tearz ya structure is too fucked up, ya puns wernt the most creative i ever seen, work on puns n structure homie n youll be iight

Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

lyrical disciple uve got this one ma nigga u had a a few punches and a good flow what i thought won it 4 you was your structure your layoout was a lot easyer to read yours and d.t's rap was about the same but it took me a lot longer to read d.t's as the structure was poor sorry dawg