Cool drop...structure was a bit different from wut ive seen but it was decent...the multis and flow was nice....hook was nice....imagery and overall piece was nice too...this was a lil over decent drop....felt it tho...give it a 8.4/10

thnx... uppin'.

Yesh this was dope VP

Nice structre, use of multi's and flow.....

This peice would be dope in audio......

ANyways this shit was worth the read....

8-10

Peace and peep any of my poetry or open mics if you want.....

thnx Ice Pick... uppin'.

uppin' for feedback

Breathe... 1 and to the 2, 2 and to the 3, lol

aiight, this was a pretty dope drop, man. I liked the wordlpay and shit. Real deep shit. I thought it was some version of the Fab song. But it wasn't. Nice shit, man. props. Structure was fucked however. but overall, dope shit. pc

this is a dope drop man, i was feelin the chorus and the flow of it is great, nice vocabulary and multies in this as well, overall good piece...1

uppin' for more feedback.

uppin' for feedback.

God damn motha fuckaz... uppin' for FEEDBACK

Wat?? this is all?????????????????

its dope.... i want to see more...

Lovin all them multi's and world play
Thought it could use some better flow or structure

But in the end, it's good

Thanks for the feeback y'all... appreciate it greatly.

Yeah Playa!!
 

Noice drop, that was some dope shit keep writing I thought there were a couple things you could work on. But overall I thought the structure was pretty good & it was laced with some sweet rhymes :shoot: :evilgrin: