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Adam 10-12-04 08:04 PM

This was feedback posted for MC RaBbIt
 
checkin tha polls.................................

Red Stroke 10-12-04 08:24 PM

Voted For: Notorious Verses

aiight i gotta go with Notorious on this battle he had some good vocab flow came harder metas and a decent structure its was a good flow

Mc rabbit some of ya stuff wasnt workin cuzz whats tha ........................................... for mayn??? so here it go

structure-Notorious
vocab-Notorious
flow-Notorious
punches-Mc

Technical 10-12-04 10:07 PM

uppin for votes on dis battle, come on people don sleep on dis battle

badgurl3136 10-12-04 10:08 PM

Voted For: Notorious Verses

okay i have to give my vote to---- notorious
Rabbit has a basic vocb with an iight word flow. Notorious has a good vocb. with an iight word flow and he also has better stucture too. I give notorious a 8/10 and rabbit a 6/10! Notorious could have done better and i've seen it to.

KISI 10-12-04 11:17 PM

Voted For: Notorious Verses

structure:notorious
flow:notorious
vocab:notorious
punches:notorious
hunger:tie
verdict:the structure of rabbits was very bad, because i didn't understand it at all at first, which is very bad. I got it after close inspection, but it shouldn't take close inspection for me to get it, this was your downfall. Elevate, because i see potential

notorious-good flow, nice use of multi's, generally it wouldn't take much to win against him in this one, and this is no hate to you rabbit, but you came raw on this one, i really like it. But a problem was that you had great flow, just not great punches to match the flow. Put the two together, and your verses will be that much better.

HottnessDefined 10-13-04 05:42 AM

Voted For: MC RaBbIt

rabbit wuz bettr den u verses he had tite punc lines and hiz flow and disses wuz tite i tink he beet u mane

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

John Gotti 10-13-04 01:09 PM

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Creativity - nice
Punches - strong, elusive
Metaphors- there
Flow- on point, I like
This is a one-sided-battle for the most part my mans came harder and better thats why he get the vote...

V/ NV, return the fav.


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