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Voted For: Infamuz
fam's lines were better structured, with j's its hard to tell wher it ends work on that structure man for real, and fam had alot more personal hits. |
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Voted For: Infamuz
Infamuz took this easy... J-nutty, u've got a lot of elevatin to do...everything in your verse was played n weak...n the structure was horrible...u need to hit enter after every line, cuz i guarantee u wont win wit a structure like that... Infamuz, i really didnt feel u had much in your verse either...u had punches, but none of 'em really stood out...but at least your structure was better...n u dont need the //// <--takin those out is up to u, but if u decide to keep puttin 'em in, voters wont like it, jus a forewarnin....anyways... V/ Infamuz, no hate, jus some honest feedback... |
Voted For: Infamuz
flow and struct: this goes to infam because his is betta put together and flows betta punches: the few i saw but goes to infam multis: Infam but both lacked them Personals: both had them bu Infam portrayed them more enjoymen: i liked infam more on this |
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Voted For: Infamuz
Aight Infamuz got this on everything coz J nutty werent even tryin...Infamuz got better structure...Vocb & everything else i'll break it down.. Structure/I Punches/I Vocab/I Wordplay/I Wit/I No Hate Return the Vote I on this Battle gettin slept on.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156848 |
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