thankyou sir
yessir

uppin sirs

uppin for feedback and maybe an award

ey yo dis was hott had good vocab,
nice structa,erthing was good but ya flow kinda fell off juss
a little though so i gove it a 9.5/10

thnx bro uppin 4 more....

uppppppiiiiinn hoooooooeeeeesss

someone...please reply with some feedback

damn! no feedback ever!

feedback!!!!!!!!

this was wack...chase I'm dissapointed

8.4/10 :)

I love you too.

Uppin you teabaggers

doo dooo gimme feedback

hmmm, ppl sayin they liked ur flow??? lol this isnt audio, you cant tel his "flow" when its written. honestly i didnt like this. shit was lackin to me. seemed real basic and the regular "i wanna be a thug but i cant but ill write like i do it" kinda shyt. i mean i used to do the same thing till i realized that hip hop is sumthing thats real that comes from the heart. im sure u just gotta keep at it. i mean ive been rapping for 2 years now n if u heard my old shit compared to my newer shyt its a huge diff. like keep at it is all i can realy say. happens to everyone

I know your older stuff may be different but it still sucks :thumbup:
I'm dope look at me kid....nah thnx 4 the feedback

word 2 this kid