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D-ICED 10-16-04 12:16 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by [.:Diabolic:.]
damn...if i COULD vote i would give this to Troop...Empire yes u may say that im d/rin cuz he in my crew...no...if u check his battles i have voted against him...

Troop i liked ya punches they hit harder in this one...ya opener was stretched...so u can work on that...ya wordplay was good too..punches were origional as well...

Empire..i didnt understand ya opener...i see where it was goin but you shoulda worded it betta..it woulda hit harder..i really didnt understand ya punches...so u need to work on ya wordplay and how u word ya punchs...cuz the p.c. line...:huh:...closer was a personal...but u coula made that a personal and a punch too..

so if i could vote i would give it to Troop...but A.I stand up

omg your in a.i and aint get the 1st line hes in g.o.d.s a ai subcrew he lists where hes from as under the steps real simple damn what the fuck :banghead:

~Luciano~ 10-16-04 12:01 PM

Uppin............................................. ...

Ragnarok 10-16-04 02:15 PM

D_Dice Had Good Lines Actually...........................

-EXPLICIT- 10-17-04 12:16 AM

Voted For: *Troop*

Troop

Bar 1 - not bad.. could have been better.. 7/10
Bar 2 - Pretty good punch / personal.. 8/10
Bar 3 - hahaha dope... good punch.. and meta.. 8/10
Bar 4 - Dope personal and closer.. 9/10...

D-Iced

Bar 1 -pretty dope opener.. 8/10
Bar 2 -wasnt feelin it too much.. could have been worded better.. 6/10
Bar 3 - not bad punch / personal... 8/10
Bar 4 - Dope closer.. overall 9/10 on the closer..


Troop got this by 1 point.. good battle.. punches.. and personals by both.. gatta give it to troop though.. pz

Mayne Event 10-17-04 12:25 AM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
Checking polls..

Sik Wit It 10-17-04 01:08 AM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
Damn mayn...i wish i could vote on this piece tho
but fo'real i think *Troop* took this one..had sum pretty hard punches..and tha White-Tee line was :laugh:

Adam 10-17-04 01:42 AM

Voted For: D-ICED

*Troop*...

Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps
.....pretty dope opener...good punch, nice name play..8/10

No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff
...didn't really like this..i understand his old alias was Caliph..but that bar didn't really flow that well...6/10

Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines
...ehh not bad...coulda made this a bit better...7/10

You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's
...good personal and closer...but seemed to be stretched....7/10

Overal...28/40...good drop...work on you structure a bit more and your personals...

D-ICED...

Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
...good personal and punch..solid opener..well done..9/10

This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
...didn't flow as well as it coulda...good punch/nameplay..7/10

Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
...not as good as you coulda made it, but it was still a connected punch...7/10

Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink
...HAHA I liked this shit...DOPE CLOSER...hahaha...nice personal and punch hahaha....9/10

Overal...32/40...you came a bit harder and deserved the win...you had the good opener and closer..nice punches and personals...good drop

v/D-ICED

Crew vote removed

~Luciano~ 10-17-04 01:49 AM

lol thats sum bullshit
fuck outta here wit dat shit

D-ICED 10-17-04 01:55 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*
lol thats sum bullshit
fuck outta here wit dat shit

lol too bad whore jerhi curls not in style too bad your 2 votes came from x a.i members real suspesious troop you d.rs :nono:

Ragnarok 10-17-04 02:00 PM

I think it was a tie.. both of you were pretty much not good...

Replay 10-17-04 02:19 PM

Voted For: *Troop*

ok first off i really don't like all this action shit.
now down to the words:

ok this was a good battle but there was only one winner

i like both mc's flows
but empire denfinally had a better stlye it just cause i'm not a fan of the hyperlinks in the battle

Empire:
Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
bad rhyme sceme and bad bar not real punch or personal
This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
i don't no i was kinda weak
Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
ok some nice mults but so weak lines what you mean answer to d.v?
Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink
lolol nice closer

Troop:
Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps
not bad as an opener
No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff
um the rhyme sceme was bad but nice line "RIP TO RAY!!1"
Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines
NICE lolololol second was hott
You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's
the link helped explain but don't like um
and i nice line

troop

D-ICED 10-17-04 04:07 PM

omg see why i post explanations this fucking dudes is stupid as fuck whos d.v?omg what the fuck and it aint 3-0 strobe will fix it cuz red bulls vote aint crew i aint been council for like 2 weeks at least

~Luciano~ 10-17-04 05:40 PM

Strobe the one that took it off u dumb ni99a
and it dont matter cuz thats 3-0 lol
consider this closed
Haaa u got Owned bitch

Compose 10-17-04 09:22 PM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
jus checkin out the polls i cant vote..............

Ras Tafari 10-17-04 10:06 PM

This was feedback posted for D-ICED
 
Nice drop D-Iced you merked him fa sho...
Troop not bad Ive seen you do way better.


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