Voted For: JRad

Weak Battle

JRad
yo punches were a slight harder than razor's..
tha flow was aight...and the structure was decent
elevate more tho..tha scrambled egg line was whack

~...razor...~
yo punches were hard too..but not hard enuff...
tha flow was aight...(almost fell tho)
structure was okay..and not stretch'd either...

Overall
JRad came harder wit tha punches...
had a better structure than ~...razor...~
and a pretty decent flow...

uppinnn........................................... .......

Voted For: JRad

you got this you had better punches and you used a lil bit of wordplay but try and elevate n try to use more complicated words other than that i spose it was aight....

return the favour links in the sig thnx... no hate

Upppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn....... ....

This was feedback posted for ~...razor...~
 

one word....pathetic

Uppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..................... ..............

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnn............

Uppin again.. ... lalalalaalaaaaa.......................

Voted For: JRad

ummmmm ok, one of the weakest battles ive ever seen on here............ i guess ill give it to jrad for that personal i guess and cuz ur verse was in english.......... also, razor sed "ill punch u in the face" or "ill hit hard" liek 3 times each..... ummmm i guess err jrad had razor on multies too........ ok thats all i needa say, u got this for bein less of a dumbass

Voted For: JRad

jrad took this easy...bettert punches better flow better structure....ur punches was aiight...ur vocab....wasnt that good...wordplay none

vote on my battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155760