Voted For: Myth

u talentless kid simply said ya skills are a MYTH/
he only use mouth to tighten his lips and consume dick/
Decent....
u tlk madd shyt and say ive been forever duckin shyt/
but like DMX said u really dunno who u fukin wit/
Better.......
throw punches and grill ya ass like i was george forman/
ya whole shyt built on lies like u the founder of mormans/
Alright punch
whole structure simple in lines and design/
cant have greatness so u tryin steal a piece of my mind/
Decent.....
jus to advanced to inhanced while u keep ya shyt simplistic/
u aint half the man u got guns i drop boms like balistics/
Bad.....Closer

Punches: You Sould work on them more...
Structure: It was alright but get rid of those "/" things
Worst Lyne: jus to advanced to inhanced while u keep ya shyt simplistic/
u aint half the man u got guns i drop boms like balistics/
Best line: throw punches and grill ya ass like i was george forman/
ya whole shyt built on lies like u the founder of mormans/




this kid claims after we battle he's done, he don't want no more beef *
he's already lost, his flows rough like tides washing through sea reefs
HAHAHha nyce opena....
souls choked up, here's a tissue, he seems to be copping feelings
fag? this kid lets men spread his legs apart like bananna peelings
LMFAO man hahahhaha..Nyce nyce...
now that's sickness, ain't no defending that, eww..that's some nasty shit
featured with prince in the background dancing, purple rain was his last hit
Its good.....
i could take this boy to a hardwood court and he still wouldn't be classic
punches have u bleeding from the nose, dumb? u ain't on the rag dick
Nyce Nyce....
u probably use to winning by no show's, proof is in the stats man *
but u ain't gotta be a cherry for my bars to consume u like pac-man
Decent....
faggot all ya useless bickering and nagging is getting to me, i'm annoyed
why u claiming ya hard but ya rhymes come plastic like mcdonald's toys
Shiet hahahha another one hahhaha....
how u gonna talk shit, 2 wins away from matching ya wins and losses, damn son *
homosexual tendencies? u a fag go dye ya hair blonde like sisqo and then join hanson
welfare or poor? kidnap ya, but ya ain't shit, ya family sends coins as ransom *
Word... tight closer ta end diz battle....


Punches: They was good..They all connected
Structure: The Structure was good and well done...
Worst Lyne: None
Best Lyne: souls choked up, here's a tissue, he seems to be copping feelings
fag? this kid lets men spread his legs apart like bananna peelings





Enjoyed: Both
v/Myth

Vote removed by Myth's request due to a crew vote

uppin for the k.o, had to get it re-opened do to a crew vote, uppin for this shit

This was feedback posted for Myth
 

Yo this is only feedback as we in the same crew both spit well gud luck fam

http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=264

D2R is active i'd PM this to ya but u can't take no more PM's

iight wutever thats kool maybe i will get koed but i dont give a shyt...but if people gunna tlk about the myth line bein played...ever sice i made my name Soul Sickness every1 has used it in there battle includen myth so if u wanna tlk about played see both sides of the story.......

uppin for the k.o, can we close this people

myth since its prolly almost over ima jus say u got skills i aint here to deny it or tlk shyt u got skills...but i think i do to so all im sayin is all that shyt i tlked i was jus tryin to get u 2 accept my battle and now that u did it aint shyt...but u holdin on to it nd cant respect the fact that i got skills as well but wutever...its kool im jus here to say that so u can feel how u want peace ~1~....

Voted For: Myth

this kid claims after we battle he's done, he don't want no more beef *
he's already lost, his flows rough like tides washing through sea reefs

not a bad opener...7/10

souls choked up, here's a tissue, he seems to be copping feelings
fag? this kid lets men spread his legs apart like bananna peelings

good punch slash meta...8/10

now that's sickness, ain't no defending that, eww..that's some nasty shit
featured with prince in the background dancing, purple rain was his last hit

this was funny as fuck...9/10

i could take this boy to a hardwood court and he still wouldn't be classic
punches have u bleeding from the nose, dumb? u ain't on the rag dick

not feelin the first line...but the 2nd carried it...7/10

u probably use to winning by no show's, proof is in the stats man *
but u ain't gotta be a cherry for my bars to consume u like pac-man

decent punch/meta....7/10

faggot all ya useless bickering and nagging is getting to me, i'm annoyed
why u claiming ya hard but ya rhymes come plastic like mcdonald's toys

not the best...but it made me laugh..so 8/10

how u gonna talk shit, 2 wins away from matching ya wins and losses, damn son *
homosexual tendencies? u a fag go dye ya hair blonde like sisqo and then join hanson

good punch....but your really sayin the same thing over a few times..about him bein gay...it was creative though...so 7/10

welfare or poor? kidnap ya, but ya ain't shit, ya family sends coins as ransom *

pretty good personal...8/10

summary: your verse was decent, not the best i've seen from you...but over all..pretty good...and i enjoyed some parts....over all score = 61/80...average per bar= 7.6


u talentless kid simply said ya skills are a MYTH/
he only use mouth to tighten his lips and consume dick/

okay personal...kind of played cause i'm sure everyones used it...and i wasn't feelin the 2nd line...6/10

u tlk madd shyt and say ive been forever duckin shyt/
but like DMX said u really dunno who u fukin wit/

you said shyt twice in the same line...thats a bad move..also...if dmx said it..or anyone else for that matter..that means..you shouldn't say it...4/10

throw punches and grill ya ass like i was george forman/
ya whole shyt built on lies like u the founder of mormans/

george forman line is played as fuck..and the 2nd line is an oppinion.not a fact...so 4/10

whole structure simple in lines and design/
cant have greatness so u tryin steal a piece of my mind/

umm...not a good self hype line..or a diss...who disses structure?...3/10

jus to advanced to inhanced while u keep ya shyt simplistic/
u aint half the man u got guns i drop boms like balistics/

this was actually good..by far the best line you had....i give it a 8/10

summary: your shit was pretty herbish and basic...you need madd elevation, potential is there obviously, cause i saw a decent line or TWO..the rest was weak...your overall score is....25/50 average score per bar: 5

this battle was not close...look at the bar comparisons....


5 and 7.6 my vote goes to myth...and fuck you if you think this is inadequate feedback....bitches...