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Ice Pick 10-14-04 07:07 PM

Show me the proof then, and why isnt your name under the battle stats

if you changed your name from somthing else to this, how was that line used....

SHOW ME PROOF

Myth 10-14-04 07:10 PM

u want proof i'm going to get it right now, i'll brb, i don't see why u bitching, u can't even take one vote against u, damn shame

streetryda 10-15-04 12:38 AM

Voted For: Myth

aight ima break it down

u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
^^aight nice oppener and nice personal 7/10
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
^^ aight i liked the over all flow and creativeness in these lines..nice punches 8/10
u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
^^aight this was okay nice flow but umm seems like u just tryed to rhyme tit with crypt it didnt make much sense but i get the personals..nice 6/10
dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson
^^nice closer ot feeling the personal too much but the fact u put it in there and punch was nice...7/10

over all verse 28/40

ok on to ice pick

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
^^ great opener nice flow and def feelin the wordplay but the subjugate ya' subjects just eh wasnt feeling that part nice personal 7/10
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
^^once again nice wordplay but tactics and battlin dont rhyme too good so it kinda made me not feel it as much umm personal wasnt that great but credit for it being in there 6/10
I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
^^aight it was okay wasnt feling it all that much too much self glorifying to me but nice flow and there wasnt really any direct punches 5/10
Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...
^^okay awesome closer i liked the personals a lot and but punches werent that hard hitting but personals made it nice 8/10
overall 26/40

nice battle was close but myth had more personals
pick had the wordplay

return the favor in my sig

BkBrawla 10-15-04 12:46 AM

Voted For: Myth

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...

^^^^^^^^^^^ WHOOOO NICE VERSE GOOD SHIT ISH NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND MULTI'Z


u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE~!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOOD VERSE NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES (DECENT)


V-MYTH CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

ICE-PICK- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE~!!!!!!! PERSONALS AND PUNCHES WERE GOOD BUT MYTH EDGE IT WITH DEM PUNCHES AND PERSONALS
YO STRUTURE IS KINDA "OK" DONT USE DAT - SHIT "OK"

MYTH-IN MY EYES U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PERONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW DA PUNCHES IS WAT EDGE IT

V-MYTH CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

CLOSE BATTLE BUT MYTH TOOK IT WIT DEM PERSONALS AND PUNCHES (HARDER)

~PEACE~

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Myth 10-15-04 11:22 AM

uppin for voted peeps, let's go

Myth 10-16-04 04:30 PM

uppin for votes in this battle, let's go peeps, explained votes only

eXpLiCiT CoNtEnT 10-16-04 04:52 PM

Voted For: Ice Pick

ice you ripped him apart you out matched him with ya first two lines i liked your verse alot, it made myths verse sound like a newbies... your multies were fuckin great and ya punches were unbilievable...

myth... your verse was good but you were outmatched try battlin some one with the same skill you got potential...

no hate nice battle... return the favour links in the sig peace \\//.

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Houdini 10-16-04 06:06 PM

This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 
Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,


HAHA NICE

Ice Pick 10-18-04 09:37 AM

Uppn for votes------------------------------------

Capital Punishment 10-18-04 07:31 PM

This was feedback posted for Myth
 
uppin for this shit peeps come on and vote

Capital Punishment 10-18-04 10:45 PM

come on people, we uppin for this peeps

Ice Pick 10-20-04 11:52 AM

upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
0000000000000000000000000000000

Psyco 10-20-04 12:22 PM

Voted For: Ice Pick

ok i feel that ice pick won this because he hit a little harder then myth

breakdown

opener-tie (both were good)
flow-ice pick
metas-ice pick
punches-tie (both had a few)
personals-myth
closer-myth
easy to read-ice pick

so i really think that ice pick won this battle

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Psyco 10-20-04 12:24 PM

return the favor yall linkz in siggy hollaholla

JackOfAllTradez 10-20-04 12:24 PM

Voted For: Myth

Emcee:Myth

Verse:
u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson
Comments:well i think that you took this barely...i think that because your punches and metaphors were a lil better than that of ice picks

Marks:
Wordplay - 5/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 8/10
Punches - 7/10
Opener - 7/10
Closer – 8/10
Personals – 8/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 7/10
Overall – 69/100
----------69%

Emcee: Ice Pick

Verse:

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...

Comments: I just wasn’t feelin ya verse…it had some nice punches but I think you need to fix ya structure…then I would of thought you would of won…along with some harder metas…

Marks:
Wordplay – 7/10
Metas – 5/10
Vocabulary -7/10
Structure – 5/10
Punches – 6/10
Opener – 6/10
Closer – 8/10
Personals – 6/10
Enjoyment – 5/10
Creativity – 6/10
Overall – 61/100
----------61%

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