Voted For: Myth

aight tight battle guys i liked the overall flow and volcab of both verses nice wordplay and structure...punches were nice and i like the personals

okay
wildfire
okay nice verse i was def feeling hte flow and wordplay nice volcab too...
good punches and personals
but you did a lot of self glorifying in the middle to the end of your verse i hate to see that a lil is alright but that was too much..it killed your drop even tho it was nice it just made me feel it less.work on that man..also some shit didnt make too much sense to me..but oyu had some nice multi's

best line
we both die only because i slice my jugular with my tongue, a razor bladed weapon..
battlin me? you steppin up to die, but this ain't the stairway to heaven..
I murder ho's, so at the end of this battle, forensics will study your mangled position..
I strangle tradition, your wins stay the same cause i mangle addition..

myth
aight nice verse man i was feeling it all throughout and great personals...nice punches and flow was tight.....you stayed on topic pretty much...and i didnt see much selfglorifyin which is a plus cuz some is alright...liked the volcab and creativeness in the drop..nice

best lines
i'll throw a zippo lighter into the bushes to start a brush fire
kid swear he "On Fire" like "lloyd banks" but i'm bout to crush tyra
wildfire couldn't elevate even if he tagged along with mountain climbers
kid's really femine inside, occupation? he'll become a gay fashion designer
u say u leave resin from smokin herbs, but u soft like wind to kites *
this boys a fag he done blown on more dicks then smokers with newport lights
all signs point to dope, lmao, boy u sweeter then caffine from coke or pepsi
this mans a fag, he pmed me the other day saying that he thought i was sexy
sick closer man nice

v/myth

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whoa *falls on face* sorry fell in whats up yall..

Voted For: WildFire

Myth:
i'll throw a zippo lighter into the bushes to start a brush fire
kid swear he "On Fire" like "lloyd banks" but i'm bout to crush tyra
First line was straight, could've been a little more creative. Second line could've been taken 2 ways - either you're calling In-Vision a female or you talkin' bout how hot the bitches you get are...
i got a certain problem i'm "addicted" to ripping veterans and ya next *
big words? u unable to pronounce em so i know u used a webster in ya text *
First line set it up good, but the punch just didn't seem all that hard to me.
ya structure is on and off like white and black keys on an "oregon" *
let's let the rv heads compare us, they'd say ya pippen and i'm jordan
First line didn't make much sense to me, second line was self-glorification...
u even said it ya self u ain't gonna be a rapper so fuck touring *
drenching this "wildfire" out cause when it's raining it's pouring *
This bar was good except for the very end, to make it better you could've substituted for "raining"
an expanded vocabulary ain't shit if u don't know how to rhyme words
periphial vision, is gone cause ya bars a horse and mine are the blinders
Could've fit "horse" in there a little better, 'nuff said...
wildfire couldn't elevate even if he tagged along with mountain climbers
kid's really femine inside, occupation? he'll become a gay fashion designer
Simple punch, gay concepts are played if stated blatenly...
u say u leave resin from smokin herbs, but u soft like wind to kites *
this boys a fag he done blown on more dicks then smokers with newport lights
At first I thought this was a real dope bar, but then I realized you had it worded differently than I saw. If you said he's blown more "fags" than smokers with newport lights" you would've gotten mad props for wordplay, if you get that...
all signs point to dope, lmao, boy u sweeter then caffine from coke or pepsi
this mans a fag, he pmed me the other day saying that he thought i was sexy
Once again, blatent gay lines are played...

Wildfire:
we both die only because i slice my jugular with my tongue, a razor bladed weapon..
battlin me? you steppin up to die, but this ain't the stairway to heaven..
First line was just ok, but the punch made up for it, but overall the bar was average...
I murder ho's, so at the end of this battle, forensics will study your mangled position..
I strangle tradition, your wins stay the same cause i mangle addition..
Good use of vocab here, this kinda seemed like a filler bar but it was still good due to the rhyming and wordage.
3-0, thats a joke, you compulsivly spit lies and shit..
want proof? it says in dudes avy that this guys a myth..
Ok, it took me a lil' while to get this, but when I finally did it was a good punch, it was just a lil' over my head lol...
Regardless of all that, I murder and Maul rats, and from good your the farthest..
Swallowin ex-lax and a gallon of margerine my shit still remains hardest..
First line was a good set-up, with a nice multi, and the punch was pretty good if you can decipher the wordplay...
with sadistic notions, I slit his wrists and tongue in a quick motion..
so he quits boastin, I freeze and chew mc's, than i spit foes and..
just so you guys know, this fag can't spit at all if his dicks frozen..
Good multis in the first 2 lines, but the punch in the 2nd line didn't connect. And the 3rd line is what I was tellin' Myth about, this was a clever line at attacking someone's sexuality...

Overall this was a mediocre battle, Myth you gotta work on those punches more, and try coming up with some wordplay, multis, etc. No hate, just givin' you some feedback. Wildfire, this wasn't as good as I've seen from you, but you still had some good stuff, your punches and wordplay took this one...
V//Wildfire

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myth if you realy want to know an explained vote um wildfire now in invision he straight merked you maybe not a KO but he merke you who cares if theres a hate vote you lost dawg..

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just checkin' this battle out..............woot woot...

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