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frein-ma$ter 10-17-04 08:00 AM

upin.............................................. .....

Replay 10-17-04 12:06 PM

Voted For: sabotage

yo man no doubt you won:
but first let me say what was wrong with frein-master did wrong:
first and most important:
your style was horribale i think you might have done everything wrong wit it first the //'s stop that second the bold letter, we no what the good lines are when we read it so no need for it third ____________ same thing as the bold letters.
ok second:
your flow sometimes it was short lines and then therew were long one and stop with the () i have no idea why you usew them
now thrid:
lyrics were pretty bad. i think it because your style and flow was bad. There was some good lines but alot just seemed played out
one think you did good was mults you had mad mults but that does win battles

ok sabotage:
first i don't like the new name
but everything else looked good

Implicit 10-17-04 01:36 PM

ok uppin 4 votes.....................................

Ragnarok 10-17-04 02:02 PM

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 
Just to tell youy.... you verse was pretty much all over the place which lost you allot of points... i was iight... but no need for he bolding and your "merked ko thing...

frein-ma$ter 10-17-04 04:31 PM

wow wat herbs......anyway uppin...................................

frein-ma$ter 10-17-04 08:08 PM

uppin this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

¤ÐÅž¤ 10-17-04 09:23 PM

This was feedback posted for sabotage
 
checkin..........................TC............... .........

streetryda 10-17-04 10:41 PM

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 
checkin polls for this................................

frein-ma$ter 10-18-04 03:43 PM

uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

frein-ma$ter 10-19-04 03:18 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!1

frein-ma$ter 10-19-04 08:42 PM

voting on this ish..........NOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!

..ADLIB.. 10-20-04 05:35 AM

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

u win

HottnessDefined 10-20-04 06:24 AM

Voted For: sabotage

sabotage got diz cuz hiz structure wuz way better den dat other guyz i culdnt even follow diz other guyz rhymez it wuz 2 fukked up

Implicit 10-20-04 06:54 AM

^2 wack votes.......................................

frein-ma$ter 10-20-04 06:58 AM

yup^ lol......but 1 each so who cares i wanna get this battle done with anyway......UPPPPPPPINNNNNN


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