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TuNiT 10-26-04 12:27 PM

you da wack wun i'm 2 up kiiiiiiiiiiiiiid :) so u shut da fuck up

TuNiT 02-28-05 06:52 AM

can we gert sum voteiz on dis battle it haz been open fo monthz biatch

Sik Wit It 03-13-05 01:06 PM

Voted For: Keys

Keys: u had aight punches, hardly any of them were landin tho, rhw atructure was good & not stretched-out, and the flow was okay, but u had some pretty weak punches tho...

Tunit: your punches were pretty weak here too, none of them landed, ur flow was a lil short, and the structure wasnt as good tho, but overall Keys took this one here tho

TuNiT 04-23-05 06:15 PM

hey vote fo meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

TuNiT 05-28-05 05:13 PM

can i get sum votrz on d battle hurr i alwayz vote foe uz

Daubs 06-02-05 09:05 AM

Voted For: TuNiT

both wack as hell and need elevation desperately, toddler rhymes and concepts.

ima give it tun coz of his first bar, was actuall punch.

rtf or il have to dq this vote.

Daubs 06-10-05 08:04 PM

dqed in a day unless u rtf in sig................

.Barz Of Steel. 06-13-05 06:40 PM

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 
pppppoooooooooollllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssssss ssssssss

Restricted 06-13-05 11:18 PM

Voted For: Keys



Keys:

I'm the winner here.. are you a man or a mouse?
He's so fuckign ugly.. The mirror's all ran out his house!
Haha..Not Hard Hitting Though..3/10
You think your dangerous like GUNIT?.. dude it's ova..
He dont hold any gun's.. He just rock's his supersoakers!
Weak..2/10
I'm not even gonna bother.. Cos I Fear noman..
I'll cut him and this verse...
....Shorter than garrycoleman!
Ok..4/10
I'll break this loser.. Leave him dazzled shaken & rattled..
Only ya mom COULD Beat-me
...................................& i aint talking about this battle!
Wack..3/10

Overall: 12/40..You Got Punches, Just Make Em Original and More Creative.

TUniT:

u want to drop somthin hot so bad u even named yoself keys (keys like computer keys)
you got as much chance of beatin me as eminem gettin on his knees (slim hatez fags)
Wack..2/10
ho please your rhymes r poor
u even get beet down by fiends like a dealers front door
WTF? Nah..2/10
u fucking whore go play wit cho dildo
even if u cut off me hands ill still flow
No NO NO!! 1/10
dis aint no show itz all fuckin real
an u suckin dick moe then a gotdang navy seal
WTF? Get Outta Here..0/10

Overall: 4/40...You Need To Stop Rapping.

~R~

UNF 06-26-05 11:09 PM

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 
Keys Got It But Can't Vote..........................

Sixth Sense 07-03-05 08:32 PM

Voted For: TuNiT

wack battle here here not enuff wordplay no stretch lines or anythin but ima give tunit the vote for just comin out wit hard punches thats it but keep it up aight this was a weak battle but can be improve by workin on ur weaknesses aight my v/ tunit


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