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*Hates uppin battles*
Anyone? Please?......... |
Cmon 1 more vote atleast..
Theres money involved. |
hey how come i cant vote on battles??????????????????????????????????????
i hate da 50 character rule |
u don't meet the post limit for this battle...upp.
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Voted For: Nostradamus
Mad Dog: FUUUUUCK! I actually feel sorry for you on this one.. your verse was so wack! and by wack I mean DOPE! .. . . .. But yeah.. had a nice plot.. Good flow.. Well done convo paragraph.. nice twist at the end.. A couple lines could have been worded better but meh.. I thought nos was like.. losing till i read his.. thats why i feel sorry for ya.. good verse but still a loss.. damn... NOS: shut the fuck up with your dope vocab and neat structure and such... OK.. WE KNOW YOUR GOOD... god damn.. The way you took on this topic was hella unique... Flow was good with lots nice assonance n even some multis.. nice verse Good battle.. but v/ = nos |
Voted For: Nostradamus
I was feeling this verse more it had alot of good emotion it' was alot deeper than mad dogs cause his showed lack of creation you had better flow and your structure was better plus better vocab and more entertaining to read. Mad dogs poor performance. Vote disqualified for Cheating. HATE/BEEF VOTE REMOVED |
Voted For: Nostradamus
hmm i dont really like to vote on topicals but aight..... m dog, ya peice was okay, maybe could have showed a lil more emotion in ya lyrics... an the situation kinda let your peice down, i wasnt feelin that part... strong points tho, ya stayed right on topic throughout, an the outcome was kinda enjoyable too read.. ya just needed more emotion in ya peice an it would have been a whole lot better... noistra, ya peice was dope, the emotion was there, each line was meaningful, an it was an all round consistent peice... vocab was top notch n the strongest point about the whole peice was how u used the topic, very enjoyable battle yall... it was a lil close but for overrall content nostra gets my vote.. |
Voted For: Nostradamus
Wow...this was a very sick battle....Okay ill start of with Nos...you had nice vocab...very in-depth descriptions which is good...imagery was there....your flow was nice...the story was a different approach...which is always good...its worked and i was feeling this piece...now to M-Dog....your story was good also...imagery was okay...but not much of it....vocab was good...flow was what separated his verse from yours....your stretched bars fucked up the flow...next time count out the syllables to make it flow better...ur story line was nice...i liked the conversation part...that was good...but i gotta vote Nos because he had better flow and imagery...good battle tho... |
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