Voted For: Ice Pick

Tight Shiiit
Ice Pick:
Punches - Hit Like A Muh Fucka... If This Was A Boxin Match I Believe This Would Be A K.O.... Felt The Title Shot One.. Dope Shit 9.5/10
Word Play - Pretty Decent I Guess To Say The Least... 6.5/10
Vocab - Ive Seen Better Vocab From You So This Is A Dissapointment From You 6.5/10
Personals - Decent But Wasnt Really There 6.5/10
Multis - Meh 6/10
Total: 35/50 Punches Knocked Him Tha Fuck Out..

3rd Shift:
Punches: Personally I Believe That You Lacked This.. Didnt Connect Very Well 6/10
Word Play: Basic Shiit I Guess Nuthin Exciting 6/10
Vocab: Better, Much Better Than Ice's I Guess 7/10
Personals: Bah 5.5/10
Multis: Pretty Good To Say The Least 7.5/10
Total: 32/50 Your Multis Were The Only Thing I Can Atleast Congratulate You On..

Close Battle But Ice Takes This 35 - 32. Not A Great Difference But I Believe He Took This..

No Hate... No D/R.. Good Luck To The Both Of Yall :thumbup:

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Voted For: Ice Pick

i voted for ice pick cause he came hard all his punches hit he had good wordplay nice metas and rhyming was ill
best line-If You put a “bullet hole” threw “My Heavyweight belt” you still couldn’t get a “title Shot
tha closest u came to wordplay is when you were 8 foolin' wit A-B-C-blocks
3rd-had aight wordplay and rhyming his punches didnt hit as hard as ices did but he came weaker then ice
best line-yu battlin 3rd wit 3 losses in a row an the 4th is next
no tums or pepcid AC can cease the heat that i bring to ya chest

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Voted For: Ice Pick

this was an ok battle...

but ice came way harder i thought hitting bar after bar...
3rd shift fuck He's Shook, Sweating Me,, Relax, He Might Start Bleeding From His Hands-And-His-Feet
This Man's-is-Weak,,Ice rips his Arms out his Sockets,, Just to start "Expanding-his-Reach
nice opener straight at him....

i'll White those Wordz out..don't worry ya' SECRET is Safe-wit-us
i DISLIKE YO' DIGESTIVE ORGANS..Translation.. i Hate-ya-GUTZ
cool flip on the 2ed line again straight at him raw...

Ya Lines,,, Like HAND ME DOWNS,,, Somebody has Used it Before kid
I cuaght and avoided the punch and tackle like i was peter warrick
Your lyrics are soft, and what adds to that is that they're published in paper-back
Can't catch Ice when his rocket-boosts, by the way, Dr.-Suess wants his papers-back
ha nice ending good punch again raw N straight at him good drop... 9.0

3ed u was aight but u aint come straight at him raw N flow was good vocab was decent but wasnt creative enough with it N thought need it to come harder...

you manifest a bitchmade beantown pussy no more no less
my flow castrates ya so u apply tampons to stop the bleedin in excess
that was nice u came at him raw...

ill make ya kids bastards to be, watch me murder this man
ya structures' outgrownin ya words like a midget wit shaq's pituatary gland
that was preety decent but could of came harder...

somebody should confinskate ya mic an hand u a dick
caz ya rhymes is IMPOTENT cant produce punches that actually hit...
i aint think this was a good ending but ok but not suited for a ending sorry but decent verse....

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Voted For: Ice Pick

3rd shift:
hmm bad stucture...but it flowed...bad punches didnt realy coem to ahrd in this one....no real hard hitting vocabulary but you had dope vocabulary it came hard but nothing new...try working on punches you'll win then....

IcePick:
k steched verse......good punches tho came hard hitting...good wordplay in there...some real hot lines no real inspiring vocabulary tho....but as i said streched lines bad stucture and flow...but you win this with ease...

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