you gotta build vocab. before you can do multies that was my point.....oh and by the way you went over the line limit on our topical battle it was 15-25 lines you have like 40 that has not gone unoticed!

No seriously, by the time I had been rapping for 6 months. I was A LOT better then that.. I think rapping is just not something he is capable of.. Full stop..

Thats not beef, or hate or anything.. Thats an honest opinion. I would tell my friends something like that if it was nessecary..

no cuz the bolded dont count and in my tryout we agreed to go 20 + liens so i thought thats how you set it up..

sorry i liedd wen i sed iw asnt good at topicals LOL

nos i agree...lol i was betta then that too..plus the fact i was 11 LOL

and it was only 33.....

I mean, I try and teach him things on MSN.. But I get fed up because he can never get his head around anything I am telling him. Its frustrating. So I usually just end up ignoring him.

20+ lines? What tryout? if your talking about the bitch slap heres the link you said nothing about it check it out and by the way im not stupid i knew you were good....

oh alright LOL.........my fault......jea i meant the bitch slapped...if you know i was good whyd you battle me

there aint nun like a challenge to help a dude elevate.....

what about the 2nd line because once you've said the first line you run out of shit to rhyme for the 2nd can you tell me how you space the rhymes out and how it's done properly.

^^Wrong...To many multies makes your verse look bad
and wack...if you need help on elevating weather its multies,
meta's, punches, personals, concepts, setups, just talk to me
on a aim when im done with class...Aim = xpill69
ill be home from college around 3pm central.

pz

go to my elevation forum we will help you :thumbup:

why is it that everyone always says that the more multies in your
verse the better...lmao you people are a joke, this is not audio
its text and there a big difference between the two...the more
multies in a text verse the wacker your shit is unless your like
superman or some shit and came make an amazing punch out it
if but then again hes dead.

pz

efusive dude can you try and help me elevate cause I got some potentual.

Sure i'll help, you have to wait till im out
of class 1st which is around 3pm central time(US)
you can get a hold of me on aim...xpill69
if you dont have aim...ill just download msn
pm me your SN or email whatever you call it on
msn..

pz