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lol at this cat sayin MY verse was wack...anyways, uppin this...
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uppin this shit.......................................
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we need some more votes here......................
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uppin this shit...................................
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Voted For: Kwell
Kwell-A decent structure which kept the flow right...weak personals, but at least you had some...not that many good punches, wordplay was good at times "cuz it's obvious i'ma against a pussy, jus like this foo's underwear " I liked that Gra$e-"And i micheal and try to malest itz a test im on a quest u next rippin u up on text u gettin a F"? do they teach spelling at your elementary school? weak punches...no personals....forced multis which made your drop look totally retarded. No wordplay...vocab was limited...elevate V/Kwell Reason:Better structure, flow, punches, wordplay, and vocab |
Kwell...you should have enough posts...if you can return the favor on both my battles...thanks fam
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Voted For: Kwell
easy: the vote obviously is one sided, i wasnt briking on any portion, ya came good Kwell, ya wordplay was felt and ya structure was good, pointer on punches = dont got one, lol, ya had a good verse, nice anology, keep it up, create a rec. Grase ya metas were failed, so did ya verse, nice effort, ya came and showed up, thats good, but ya didnt come through with a win this time, maybe next time, but at least ya elevating, and thats wat this is all about, right? vote: Kwell return the favor, links in ma sig = vrs. jr freeze |
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Voted For: Kwell
Grase... ya whole shyt was sloppy, dawg... no hate,just truth... no punches were thrown in ya verse... everything was chopped up and nothing led to to the next line... work on y astructure and ya disses... punchlines were non-existant... seriously need elevation here Kwell... you killed this dude with ya verse... that us line was cool as shyt and i liked the play on his name... GAS...see how for you travel... hot shit son... structure was good... punches connected... personals woulda improved it but ya punches stung him well enough... good shyt yo |
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