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Abraxas 10-22-04 08:53 PM

vote..............................................

Abraxas 10-23-04 01:07 PM

You Rotten bastards Vote.......................................

anxiety 10-23-04 08:22 PM

Lets go jackass's...

Abraxas 10-24-04 01:46 PM

Elevated is pretty much dead.......................................

Abraxas 10-24-04 10:40 PM

How hard is it to vote in ONE battle bitches.....................

anxiety 10-24-04 11:45 PM

How hard is it to get one fucking vote... Or even one feedback... Do we even have any views?

La Cosa Nostra 10-25-04 07:01 PM

Voted For: Paramik

Alright, to be compleatly honest. I think Paramik won this battle. Some of his punches were pretty good, his flow was more or less on point. Some could of been worded better, like the Jpoll one, I got it, but yea.. Better worded could of made it one of those punches that make ya go "Ha!".. lol.. Also I didnt really like your closer, but you came pretty good and it was enough to take this.

Ajax, lines were too short in some cases, opening bar was good, The personals about his open mics were well thought out and I was feelin em, but some I felt were only really basically references.. As opposed to dope punchlines.. If you know what I mean. I liked your verse too, but in the end I think paramik jus nipped the win with his consistance in punches n shit.

No hate, just honestly what I thought.
Peace.

Abraxas 10-25-04 07:13 PM

I'm so happy someone finnaly did vote.. im giving you 5000 RV money!!!!! and we had allota damn views

Abraxas 10-27-04 07:16 PM

Upping............................................

anxiety 10-27-04 08:01 PM

If we dont get more votes, imma tell strobe to give this too you... i'll give it a week or so...

Abraxas 10-30-04 07:08 PM

Upping............................................ ....

Artemis 10-30-04 09:26 PM

This was feedback posted for Paramik
 
yo this was a nice battle. But I really don't like to vote on battles when I'm cool wit both. So I'll jus give feed.

Para, I liked yo verse. I think the big weakness of yo verse was that you used too basic rhyming. Yo mosst non-basic one was "last" and "ass". Like Anx for example used "barely though" wit "scenario". But you 14 and young and got time to up that vocab. haha lol also, try addin' multi's maybe, and inners. but you had some nice lines.I liked that JP line. ill lol I got that shit. Nameplay was aiight, but that shit be soo played now, so it ain't ht ebest no more unless it's more witty, nah layins? but overall nice verse

Anxiety, you had nice rhymin' words. I liked that. But in that LOT line, wtf? yo structure looked fucked there. But the line was good once I figured it out. nice lines, pretty good punches.

Overall, this pretty close battle. could fall either way. Nice verses by both. props. and if you haven;t checked it out yet ,vote on my battle wit EyeDentikal in "frontlines" pc

Artemis 10-30-04 09:27 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157965

nah layins?................. pc

Abraxas 11-14-04 12:22 PM

Ive upping so amny times... anxciety said that if this isnt closed in a week i get the win....... and it passsed about.... 2 weeks since he said that....

E Looch 11-15-04 08:44 PM

Voted For: Paramik

weak battle to me neither brought much or didnt care to

paramik- opener was basic nothin that good there 2 bar played wordplay not a very good bar 3 bar was coo...... wordplay was there punch was decent best bar so far 4 bar lmaoo that was decent but funny punch missed a lil bit closer was ok didnt feal it to much on that it was ight though

anxiety- opener was ????? dumb honestly not a hard punch or personal 2 bar not that good if hes ghostin for somebody then some1 thinks he nice right? 3 bar filler all day i see that 4 bar was good wordplay i think if u catch it nice punch there 5 bar was plain nothin there put words and a filler bar not a good verse overall liquor line was pretty nice though


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