For starters, sinner has the IQ of a fly. The kid will look at that, read the whole thing, and say "But I dont understand assonance... What is the right rhyme sequence in 3/4ths and I havnt read OMB's tutorial, but how do you do multies and what is the correct amount of them in a bar??????????????"...

Oh...

And X, I very much doubt you will be the best any time soon. Infact, I very much doubt you will ever be the best. I agree that you might elevate, but being the best takes more then studying vets and practicing. You need to be rhyming and rapping for years and years and more importantly, you need to have an extremily versatile brain man, Im talkin you gotta be able to imagine crazy shit quickly and put it in rhymes and punchlines....

But Im not gonna just shut you down.. Everyone has to start somewhere..
Keep at it.. :thumbup:

good job nostra thats the additude we all need...