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Voted For: Kwell
kwell got this one cause of harder hits for sure and came with alot of disses pay cam aight hard not hard enough hits though his structure was good but kwell get thsi |
Voted For: PayDay
aight.. payday, dont space ya bars out like that, makes em seem like they dont connect in places, an dosent flow as well... but.... Punishment is painful when you know you deserve it// 1 It's like a hustla on a clucka ~ let me show you how I serve it ^^^ thats a real nice opener, ill wordplay.. You Already Know I defeat the room// 3 Then I be all over your girlfriend like some Cheap Perfume ^^^ defeat the room line was a lil self glorfyin but the cheap perfume line was pretty humouress... Kwell I pull more strings than 10 guitars// 5 and I will leave u dumped in the dumpster wit More than just Scars// ^^^ wasnt feelin it, seemed a lil forced... I’ll Stab n’ Lynch you with a Pad n’ Pencil// 7 A Lyrical god ~ I got mad skillz but you don’t even Have Potential// ^^ not bad, decent wordplay, but a lil self glorying an again seemed somewhat forced... PayDay is a Rappin Monsta ~ like the sopranos I’m a mobsta// 9 I Have you eatin shells n’ I aint talking bout Crabs n’ Lobstas// ^^^ wasnt feelin ya closer.. lacked creativity.... kwell......... t damn sure aint hard ta' tell this is one of RV's shadiest geeks n wit these lyrical shots, ..............i've got the kinda arms that'll rock this baby ta' sleep u crazy ta' see a win in your future, son........foo it's impossible ya too stupid...u wouldn't have IQ if i played pool wit ya opticals ^^^ the optical line was the only thing i was feelin in those bars i'm eludin this obstacle...u've been slow since the damn beginnin yo, like mute people at sports events...u've got no chants of winnin ^^^ prettyy decent vocab, nice punch in there too, an nice wordplay.. i already demoralized u dawg...now u better off steppin in stealth u the laughing stock of RV, n it's bout time that u invest in yourself ^^^ decent shit, nice wordplay an punch, hard hittin personal too.. i didnt wanna stoop to this dude's level, cuz thats a loss of respect but next time PayDay comes thru, i already know i've got him in check... ^^^ noit the strongest closer, but it seemed more creative than paydays closer... on the whole, kwells verse was more creative an had the hard hittin punches, an payday seemed to self glorify in his verse, so my vote goes too kwell no hate to neither of ya... can i get a returned vote in my sig? thanx peace Vote switched |
shit, i posted that in the wrong box
kwell get that vote changed by strobe........... ...an return the favor, peace |
Voted For: PayDay
payday took this one...betta punches...betta flow...structure...an overall better battle verse... wusnt' feelin' kwell...less flow... v/ payday |
Voted For: Kwell
Kwell won no doubt had flo srtucture and sum good vocab but sum shit dnt really rhmye man cmon,,,,,, lookin forward for outr battle kat...........betta accept |
Voted For: Kwell
u killed him...better punches, but structure, better wordplay, and more creative rhyming payday had a nice verse, but the structure was out of it...and his bars werent complete to me...some bars had add-on's and some need more words... kwell had a wayyyy better verse...his shit made since ,and it was creative and different from what i usually read...good shit return HONEST votes on RED BEAM battles...ya feels...in sig |
Voted For: Kwell
ok~good battle both kwell: your verse was dope, you had good flow and some hard hitting lines, original quality to your verse too, and style here, i like your opener, good way to start"i've got the kinda arms that'll rock this baby to sleep".dope line,,,and the sports event line was a dope punch too, your closer was a nice way to finish it,,strong lines and punches here....nice job payday:your lines were good here too, but i dont think they were strong enough to take the win, i just think your opponent came harder and i liked his flow better.....but tight battle both..1 |
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