Voted For: RED BEAM

red beam first: shows good talent with rhymin "list" and "wreckless" also "game over" with "flame thrower", did well with bringin everything around him to this battle an example: using "konttroverzey"''s name and workin with "flip" and "game over" thing was very creative, and the structure was great very readible and understandable.

logistic: seemed to rhyme simple most of the time through, "done" with "son" also "race" and "tast" and i did not like at all how he said "candle" twice and didnt understand the
"Control yourlfow better than a fucking roman candle."
wasnt feelin it. the structure was good.

summary: read beam came hard with evry line, logic had some that were just plain had no core and not hard at all like this one

"Whys Six afraid of Seven? Because Seven "ATE" Nine,
Whys "Red Beam" afraid of me? Cuz, he knows he cant rhyme."

thats just stupid, no disrespect intended, cause ive done it before,and also at the end of your verse you said this
"I think that was pretty good.. i guess...."
i guess! what the fuck is that you dont say that about yourself, you have to believe that you shit is good cause if you showin doubt in ya own work then that shows readers that you might not have come your hardest so why vote for him, you have to make ppl believe your good, cause that exactly what tupac did, he made sure you believed evry damn word he said, and we did.
overall it goes to read beam.

good battle

Voted For: RED BEAM

mann that was a weak ass battle and a hard decission to vote on. red gets this cuz he had better flow, punchlines and other shit
u both need to fuckin elevate

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Voted For: RED BEAM

i voted for red beam he had better flows puches meatphores timing flow all around a good verse
logistic verse was aight not very good whats with that 67 ate 9 shit that was stupid

good lookn for those votes people...lets cop some more, or is it 3 wins its over?

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Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

Logistic takes this one....his punches were decent and hit hard enough for the win....his verse flowed well....solid structure....nice inners........everything was good except the closer.....those last 3 lines.....never make your verse have an odd number of lines.....it don't sound that goood....it's like a movie that just ends and you're expecting more....elevate more....you've got better....a lot better

RED BEAM......your bverse was really tight too but punches didn't hit as hard as Logistic's....i mean your punches were decent but just not enough to take the win....ya know?good wordplay....like 1 metta and it was good.....close close battle.....kep elevating aight?

peace

i was wondering what that tupac shit was..music started playn, and i was tryna find out what it was..lol...but good lookn for the vote up on here

Voted For: RED BEAM

decent battle.

L - your verse was not bad had alright flow and some decent internals. your vocab was alright but u coulda used more words instead of candles twice in one scheme. structure was good. punches were decent but not really ne personals. i seen a lotta of rhyming just for the sake of it. u need to turn that into good punches and incorporate personals in ya verse.

R - good drop. it had better vocab and stronger punches. why did u pull out all these other rappers names tho i wasnt feelin it. what was the point of that? besides that tho u had a stonger verse. structure was good, flowed well some multis thrown in there. good drop

Vote - Red Beam