This was feedback posted for illmatico
cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!
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Voted For: illmatico
aight well this wasnt even a close battle... Illmatico~ nice way to use his name and destinys child as a personal... i liked your verse and your punches because they just hit harder... 8/10 Destiny~your verse was just too basic for me... weak punches, bad structure (it kept changing actually), you need to get more personal and stay consistent and you'll do better 6/10 v/illmatico |
This was feedback posted for illmatico
i am definately not postin feedback... i jsut wanna se the rest of the votes
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^^ garbage as hell and he knows it... d/r votes...
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Voted For: illmatico
v/ illmatico destiny you were all over the place with your topics, some of them didnt make sense at all to me, you also really lacked on the punches and illmatico had some nice personals to throw at you, so im givin this to illmatico |
Voted For: illmatico
LilMatico Better Flow Good WOrdPlay Saw Some Good SHit Punchlines Was Hitting Came Hard Structure Was Decent Vocabulary Was Cool Came At It Good Fam Big Ups Destiny Pretty Good Not Good Nuff Bro Stay On Ya Level |
Voted For: illmatico
l0l vote goes to illmatico Relish- What were you thinking? "Cover her with buter, Make you jelous, Add some relish, I merk you worse then your mom on ya bat,When shes finished," -Your rhyme was off and on.....Would go and freeze up go and freeze...which never got me into the flow. Seemed like you just wanted things to rhyme didnt care about the quality of your writing. Illmatic- The flow wasnt sick, but I felt it more the above. The punches were better and not as preschool. Still the quality was not that great. BUt since I have to vote it goes to you ill. |
Voted For: ~DESTINY~
u suck nef i cant tell u enuff but if u wanna battle wuz good cuz i'll do u worse den he jus did u |
Voted For: illmatico
Ack, this battle was awful. The flow was off in both verses, work on syllable count- both of you. But my vote goes to Ill because he came slightly harder. I saw more personals and a hint at wordplay and multis. But, whateva. Peep my dead battle. :( |
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