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...uppin 4 da last time................................
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Voted For: lil kid
Lil Kid's Still Refers to His Pre-school days at his cresh// My rhymes upon Impact Tears and Ravages ya Flesh// ^^^^^^^^^^^^HMM KINDA PLAYED PUNCH GOOD FLOW GOOD STRUTURE BUT IT WAS PLAYED Ya Deceased-Terminated Prematurely Like an Abortion// Surprise Ambush Wit my 0-0 record didnt have time for a caution// LINES A LIL TOOOOO STRETCH BUT IT WASNT AN GOOD PUNCH THOUGH The way Ive Merked This dude he'll b trippin and Regurgitatin His Food// This Battle was over before it begun It was jus easy to Conclude// ^^^^^^^^^^^ YA MESSING UP DA FLOW.LINES A LIL TO STRETCH NOW U HAD AN PUNCH ON THIS BUT IT WASNT HITTING DEAD AIM-YA NEED TO WORK ON PUNCHES IT WASNT HITTING VERY WELL ENOUGH,USE MORE CREATIVE ONES,LINES WAS TOO BASIC I Hurt-Foolz...so i'l have you "Covered Wit Shellz" likez "Turtlez"... ...I laugh when I See-You-Spit...have you "Stutterin" like your from "G-Unit"!...lol... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH Beat me? You On-Jointz?...have ya "Sit On Knivez" just so you "On-Point"!... ...This guyz soft like Furry-Kittenz...i'ma leave "Dead Aim" wit "Blurry-Vision!"... ...I'll Smack-Ya-Crew...i'm still young but i've never met anybody as Wack-As-You!... ...You got Lead-Mayne?...well i'ma "Break Ya Gunz" so ya really "Dead-Aim!"... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I SAW NICE MULTI'Z GOOD FLOW GOOD PUNCHES LIL KID-HAD MULTI'Z GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW,,,,,NEEDS TO WORK ON STRUTURE AND VOCAB AND USING PERSONALS OVERALL-LIL KID TAKE DIS HANDS DOWN HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES GOOD FLOW,BUT DA PUNCHES JUST WON DIS CATEGORY DEAD AIM-YA NEED TO WORK ON YA PUNCHES A BIT PLAYED AND TOO BASIC,,,,ELEVATE USING CREATIVE PUNCHES ,,,KEEP DA LINES LENGHT UP,,,,,,,,PLUS USE PERSONALS "OK" WORK ON HARDER PUNCHES BASICALLY ~PEACE~ |
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