This was feedback posted for Poetikal Panda
 

cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!

Upping for more Vote's People!!!!Don't Sleep On this........

This was feedback posted for Poetikal Panda
 

well an easy one to judge here...
vivids verse was too short to get enough imagery or depth into this battle.
what vivid put was actually quite good,but you blew it by not getting enough into it,flow,struc and vocab was pretty good...

oops i aint got 20 posts....so ill holla back shortly,
meanwhile can u both reurn tha fav...much appreciated
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156905
however panda had more depth and imagery,and his vocab and complexity were jus on a higher level..
not bad for a quik drop at all.

Upping for This Battle C'mon Peep's Don't Sleep On This.......

Upping for this Batte Ya'll Needing this Closed Pz...!!!

Voted For: VIvID

what the fuck????
are u guys even battlin against each other or just tryin to rhyme whatever u want?
this was 1 of the worst battle iv seen
thats all i got to say

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Fuckin Cock-Face^^^^TOPICAL u fag...Anyway Uppin for vote's don't Sleep ...

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

man im not even gonna do those big votes like al the rest of the battles coz this one is soooo short lol...why cant all battles be this short...anyways..

i think that you won because you had better vocab and in topicals that is what paints the picture in peoples mind.

vivid i thikn you lost because of lac of vocab...go read a websters or something......pz

V/conclusion

:thumbup: return the favor in my sig....much appreciated.

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

ok i dont know were you came from panda but damn its like you came outta nowhere, and just started battlin and you have great wordin and damn. vivid i really liked yours you killed it with that ender i was likin that
"exhault thee, hold your name high
but question why do people die."
and panda that crip line damn. im'a have to give this to p both of yours was good though.

WTF!? I won, even with Vivid's Unexplained Vote's....Fuck it Upping for vote's...

either this guy is an alias of a mod or a mod's his friend why the hell did all my votes get dq'd dude already won like 5 -2 or 3 i dont remeber but thats pretty stupid that they didnt count certain votes

Voted For: VIvID

Aii This wHAT IT IS

OVERALL YO BOTH DI GOOD BETTER THAN I COULD DO IN A TOPICAL BUTI FELT VIVIDZ VERSE MORE ITS LIKE IT HHAD MORE MEANIN AND THE STRUCTURE WAS NICE ALTHOUGH *P~P* TOOK FLOW AND TECHNIQUE AND RAN WIT IT IT SEEMZ SOMETHIN TOL ME TO VOTE FOR VIVID SO MY VOTE IZ
VIVID

(CAN yOU GUYZ PLZ RETURN THE FAVOR BE NICE I VOTED FOR YOUR BATTLE SO PLZ CAN YOU VOTE FOR MY BATTLE AGAINST UNTOUCHABLE SO I CAN GET IT OUT OGF MY WAY I KNOW IMA WIN ITS JUS NOONEZ GIVIN DAT LAST VOTE IM NOT SAYIN VOTE FOR ME BUT JUS VOTE PLZ PLZPLZPPLZPZPZPLZPLZPL

PRETTY PLZ) lol

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

i liked conclusions verse better then vivids his was ight but conclusin was lil better at this topical but u should have put it in topical forum

Upping for votes peeps lets get this closed