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This was feedback posted for warrior
 

ha ha ha.....yo warrior that verse was sick with personals. keep it up and keep reppin that Wisemen Comittee...

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uppin fo votes, come on yall start votin......................

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come on uppin on dis battle lets go hurry up....................

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Eh... Notorious wins for being a lil more creative. Both didn't do good. The other guy relied to much on external metyhods to get his point across, links and quotes are archaic and won't get u anyplace much anymore. Just diss him and gewt creative, lke some wordplay or some shit. Notorious had multis, weren't very good, but they were there.

Vote: Notorious Verses

Voted For: warrior

i'ma vote for warrior

notorious verses was dope but i liked warrior's punches

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Voted For: warrior

Yo this one goes to Warrior mayne...

Punchlines-Warrior
Flow-Warrior
Structure-Notorious

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Voted For: warrior

Yo Despite Da Hype I Gotta Short Fuse Like Black Jews
Anotha Check Of My List Of Emcees Like NIKE Shoes
Dawg Ur Flo Gets Credits Like Visa Cards Dats Stepped On
I Would Battle Cuz Even My Elevated Status Couldnt Stop Dis Match From Gettin Slept On
I Give Pleasure To Voters Cuz Dawg I Lyrically Grope
U Need To Note, Dat Lyricist Focus Like Bloods On Da East Coast
Dawg Da Flow Is Rediculous, Yes Understand Dat U AInt Da Sickest
Dis Win Im Obtainin Is A Good Addition Like Da Rap Olympics
Dawg I Slaughter Emcees, I Don Mean To Mingle
Dawg Worst Of All U Got Ur Name Of Lloyd Banks Single(Warrior)
^^^^^^^^ REALLY U AINT PUT DOWN NO PUNCHES ALL FLOW U WAS TALKIN TO YA SELF NO PUNCHES ALL FLOW




notorious verses' verse is notorious heres warriors explaination/
the definition of notorious means to have a bad reputation/(his verse is known to be bad)

ima fuck up "verses" so bad u gon have to edit~ya~self/
cause we all know ya wack man u even said~it~ya~self/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Notorious Verses
ill battle either one of yall, im whack truss me.....



this bitches chances of "beatin me" is worst~then~an~armless~chick/
its like i tatooed my rhymes to my penis the way "verses"~be~on~my~dick/
^ WHOA NICE GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND FLOW I LIKE THA WAY U USE THAT QUOTE NICE FAM




im leavin verse~lost ya words~soft talkin shit will get this herb~tossed/
he found out "greatness cant be taught".....right after he got his third~loss/

my losses will neva go~to~three but ull get a vote hopefully/
id tell u to vote wit an alias but then again ull prolly vote~for~me/
^^^^^^ EH OK CLOSA NOT AN GOOD CLOSA BUT DA PUNCHES WAS EH OK


OVERALL= DIS BATTLE IS KIND ONE-SIDED WARRIOR HAD PUNCHES AND DID AN GOOD JOB BY USING THEM PERSONALS............BUT NOR.VERSUS HE DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES HE WAS BASICALLY TALKIN ABOUT HIMSELF AND NOT DISSING WARRIOR

SO VOTE WARRIRO HANDS DOWN