| BlackMagik |
10-25-04 08:08 PM |
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Originally Posted by streetryda
dude that was def deep felt it all the way threw lots of emotion..flowed nice...def impacted my thoughts and put images as i read it that was real tight...try and use more complex vocab that woulda make it off the hook but it was still real nice...
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^^true...this shit was deep, and very good...the only thing missing was the vocabulary...using larger words in a rhyme is a sign of intelligence, and that makes more people want to read it, because it proves that you know what you are talking about and can explain it vividly...anyways...great imaginary...structure...flow...everything was there but the vocab...but still an excellent piece...7.5/10 dawg...nice work...stay up...1 |
