nobodys gonna vote for this, this is some bullshit

Voted For: Theosophic~Truth

Lil tra HA! funny, thats more than your name though
cause after this battle, that'll be the size of your ego
-ok
but what can you see though, the truth?.. I think not
cause your better off thinking that......
.........raps what you put over food pots
-umm....
and you've been caught, wanted tried and found guilty
using more played lines than sports fields that look filthy
-pretty good
told him he needs to elevate, cause his style is surley poor
so he put his written in an elevator.........
................and sent it to the second floor
-ok...
just a suburb kid wit a rap CD, that thinks he knows the deal
but still thinks..........
2pac's really pacman 2, and biggie's an extra large meal
-nice

Voted For: Theosophic~Truth

lil tra: blah
1st bar was played and unneeded pretty much a whack line in the making:).2nd bar played again money and a disease wow..
3rd bar was weirdly odd and most likely a filler. 4th bar was kind of gay how you set it up. 5th bar was okay probably your best one so far. overall: 4.5/10

Theosophic~Truth: blah!
1st bar was a nice personal at best to start off with in this battle. 2nd bar was somewhat played but decent. 3rd bar was okay straight. 4th bar was whack pretty much one of the most played lines in the book. 5th bar was weird but pretty humorous. overall 7.5/10

vote: theo

Voted For: Theosophic~Truth

Lil Tra: your verse was alrite, you basiclly talked about how you gonna rip this kid in a battle n didn't. You should really never talk about urself in a text battle, because a text battle is about dissing the other person! Your structure was alrite, jst got me completly lost on the 3rd bar. Your vocab was okay, but not good..Everything i've explaind is what you should elevate..

Theosophic~Truth: Your structure was kinda off, but its cool, cuz ur punches made it look like it didn't matter. Your flow too was alittle off, but the punches once again in them made it look like it didn't matter. Your vocab was very weak this time, you should try to use words like temparary, temptations, disgrace etc.. like those big words..alrite?? but you basiclly killed the other guy with your punches.. your opener was good, but ur ender killed him!!

vote:Theosophic~Truth

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uppin' for my boy theo...

ya got 'em crhymie. keep fuckin' shit up partna. do the damn thing. oner.

...the super...

lil tra, nice verse...you got down too homie, stay up and keep riding.

...s.v.