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uppin for some fucking honest explained votes peeps
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uppin for honest explained votes peeps
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Voted For: Banks
imma give this to eye: lethal lunatic: ya structure was good. flow was umm ok. ya had some pretty weak attempts at punches. also when i started reading the G-G-G-G line, i thought u might of finished it off well. but again a weak attempt at a personal. I think you need to work on ya wordplay n metas too. i dunno if you were tryna do sumfin with tha chokehold line. it could of bin wprded better to make a successful meta. no hate. Eyedentikal: ok nice structure, almost perfect. nice punches. you had alot of metas here too. really nice ones:- i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets ^nice metas... links were usefull too. although i would try to cut them out in battles. 1 or 2 maybe but don't go over the top. Just a thought. but its your verse. Ok imma giving this to eye for harder punches and better usage of metas. Vote: eye Return tha favour please. |
Voted For: Banks
Sortin it out... i don't know why were even battling i guess ya attempting to match wits i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets ^^^ One of my favorite verses. a lot of wordplay and good vocab. Metas were good, i didn't see any multis. Punches landed and persoanls were good if you check the linkss. 8/10 Fuck Banks, I’m a young buck; just 12 years old Like a choke hold, now you wit no throat all cold ^^It show taht your young. No good metas at all, the second line sounds a lot like a verse from d12. No multis that were good. That and that don't count as a multi. FLow was good. 5/10 Return the favor One |
uppin for honest explained votes peeps
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do you even get the whole line wit bucks and young buck
young buck= young thug/ and the member of g unit Banks= him and the member of g-unit bitch |
This was feedback posted for Banks
Speaking of forced wordplay to the max..
Lmao.. Wow. |
Voted For: Banks
Lethal Lunatic’s Verse This worthless punk ass bitch trying to flick me off Pussy, trying to be hard so he tries to walk how G’s walk ^nice openor G-G-G-G, why you stuttering are you scared So if you’re a pussy put ya hands in the air ^lol…nice 1 Fuck Banks, I’m a young buck; just 12 years old Like a choke hold, now you wit no throat all cold ^…ok… Damn dawg wen will ya get it, ya fucking worthless The heat I pack is powerful and you’re just hurt less ^haha….NO So fuck it I’ll cast slap, this rookie and leave the past back My wordplay who has that?, no one should ask that ^pretty decent Will you die or ride, on the G side, or just hide Cuz I know deep down inside, you’re a pussy in and outside ^…okay hea too… Rookie of September thats bullshit cuz ya rhymes is wack Cuz every time you take 1 step front, you take 3 steps back ^decent closer Banks’ Verse kid nobody feels ya like paralysis victims recieving lethal injections u could be the child of a minister or jesus and still not see perfection ^nice opener i thought i recognized ya, this kid is the band-aid off nelly's cheek ll u wouldn't get noticed even if u had laryngitis and attempted to speak ^nice punch u probably use to racking up wins by several battles with disqualifications a funeral? he's gonna die cause my bars run him over like vice city hatians ^haha…anotha nice punch hea too this kids gonna say i'm gay but vote for me and then want the vote taken does anyone wanna see a pic of lethal go look at the sig made by forsaken ^decent i don't know why were even battling i guess ya attempting to match wits i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets ^pretty nice hea too ya career seems to be falling quicker then 80 yr old men running marathons and u beating me is just like chemotherapy patients going to hair salons ^an ‘okay’ punch hea… come on now stop it, this boys must be a fag cause he stalks my threads so ya career is done like the future of illegal immigrants caught by feds ^pretty nice punch hea this kids ego is probably really overwhelming, knock him down a few notches but lethal showing any skills is like arm amputee's wearing two watches ^nice closer Overall Banks took this one… Just had harder punches than L.L. …had a better flow & all… But mostly Banks gets my vote Cuz he had harder punches than L.L. …Pz |
uppin to get this closed peeps, honest explained votes
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you a bitch you changed everything after I spit my verse where is ya sig where is ya title i dissed you on and you are wack you biatch
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Voted For: Banks
i voted for this dude cuz his verse was set up superbly and he just had better lyrics |
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