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aight dawg w/e...i think u jus mad cuz u losin to a new face
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KWell:
k you came pretty hot dawg nice stuctre some alright punches in durr but never the less that shit could of been better you had some nice vocab in most spots but i think kontro came hotter with vocab...you had some good flow and metas pretty nice wit them witty meta actualy...7/10 Kontroverzy: that was pretty hot dawg...nice stucture and it flowed pretty good hot punchlines they were on fire damn...jk...but that you got this battle better punches ther ebetter the punch there easyer you got it he had punches and personals...but there also punches hah jk...think i need to say all this? haha....kontro: 8.4/10 VOTE: Kontroverzy return the favour hurr: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156958 |
Ima have 2 give this one 2 Kon 4 droppin less wack
Kwell u had nice struc ya punches were weak personals were ok Kontro U came kinda weak here kid Punches were ok Personals were alright Multi's was good This was close but my vote go;s 2 Kontroverzey |
v/ kontro
i liked kwell's verse but it was so unoriginal that it made his verse wack... i must have seen over 8 of them lines before or a different set up but still the same concept you gotta come original and thats what kontro did even tho his verse wasnt fire either it was still better than kwell.'s decent battle |
tru.....thats 5-3.........over?
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kontroversy
Rv reputation Indicates, This Kid's a herb, That's Logical... Have Kwell's girl wonderin' why His mother waitin outside the hospital... boring concept Puttin This Kid To the test, and he doesn't dare to see his final results.... Slice you Twice, Obliviate Your linesPause .....................................Stop, freeze, Put your lines to a hault.. no punch I'm Above average, This Dude stays underground like talib kwelli... When it comes to hot kids, you need help, Or you'll end up done, ....................................Like the future of R.kelly... stretched, still nuthing Writin On writer's block, But dawg Brain cells aint needed to beat you... I can see the bitch right through you, How? your shirt is see-through... decent Letters both start with a "K" thats about the only comaprison to dope... You couldn't spit sick If you Gave head to your local pope... nah Kwell I guess i could defend or attack, but none of it matters cuz dawg, you outta luck.....right now you under the latter ehh, ok i'll leave u bundled n battered--intestines left split n severed laughin, as i watch you struggle tryna git ya shit together no you're just a bitch on her period, as you're makin ya scribbles so as an MC you a 10......widda decimal place in the middle still boring u aint lifted---rap skills? for you, those never existed, son the closest you eva gon git to a crown.....is wit ya tongue blah look, i dont spit fa' fun...i'm comin at u wit my articles blazin u a zero--looked u up in the dictionary, n u far from amazin no! i'm a bit twisted...quick witted when my spit hit this man chop his verse up, ...........so he knows what happens when shit hits the fan ok i'm tired of ya bullshit lines, n i wont hesitate to make u stop i'll leave u wit crutches, .......jus to become the first person that eva gave u props hahaha V/ Kwell Pretty much both came shitty...it came between kwells closer and kontro's see through line...and kwell's had me laughin...thats it...shoulda came hard kontro =\ |
Kwell...you had alot of wordplay if you just had some more origianl concepts you woulda took this but the playedness of your verse is what killed u becuz u were much more complex than he was...with fantastic wordplay but just played shit...period lines are like a mortal sin....your closer was ncie but the rest was played but clever.
Give you a...........7/10 Kontro....you got this by the skin of your teeth with just more originality, not very complex an the stop kwell thing was wack but u had clever persoanls, and nice flow...so I gave to just on that but if kwell had used the same owrdplay on more original concepts he woulda murked u easy...but u got it just by being original no other reason really. Give ya a........7.2/10 Vote: Kontro |
^i appreciate that...very good vote/feedback......
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vote Kwell
kontroversy you verse was pure ass, you need to elevate homie.... kwell crushed this fool with better punches, and flow....... kon be all over the place with nonsense....... cat sucks..... vote: kwell |
kontroversy
Rv reputation Indicates, This Kid's a herb, That's Logical... Have Kwell's girl wonderin' why His mother waitin outside the hospital... nah... Puttin This Kid To the test, and he doesn't dare to see his final results.... Slice you Twice, Obliviate Your linesPause .....................................Stop, freeze, Put your lines to a hault.. wheres the punch? I'm Above average, This Dude stays underground like talib kwelli... When it comes to hot kids, you need help, Or you'll end up done, ....................................Like the future of R.kelly... no punch once again Writin On writer's block, But dawg Brain cells aint needed to beat you... I can see the bitch right through you, How? your shirt is see-through... stretched....bad wording...could of been better Letters both start with a "K" thats about the only comaprison to dope... You couldn't spit sick If you Gave head to your local pope... nah Kwell I guess i could defend or attack, but none of it matters cuz dawg, you outta luck.....right now you under the latter ehh i'll leave u bundled n battered--intestines left split n severed laughin, as i watch you struggle tryna git ya shit together nah you're just a bitch on her period, as you're makin ya scribbles so as an MC you a 10......widda decimal place in the middle dont like it u aint lifted---rap skills? for you, those never existed, son the closest you eva gon git to a crown.....is wit ya tongue ..... look, i dont spit fa' fun...i'm comin at u wit my articles blazin u a zero--looked u up in the dictionary, n u far from amazin Nope i'm a bit twisted...quick witted when my spit hit this man chop his verse up, ...........so he knows what happens when shit hits the fan could of been better i'm tired of ya bullshit lines, n i wont hesitate to make u stop i'll leave u wit crutches, .......jus to become the first person that eva gave u props heh...ehh could of been better Kwell won this battle with an overall better verse, both came horrible but kwell came more consistent with at least some punches and not some wack filler...=\.... blah at this battle kwell wins. V/ Kwell |
punches-kwell(egded it out)
multies-tie wordplay-kwell...edged it personals-none flow-kwell metaz-kwell creativity-tie vote-kwell this was close but kwell edged it out with his punches ...........kontro u could of came harder...... and just to straighten up the vote count ....its 6-6 now |
its already over..isnt it first to 5 votes..
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no^ it goes on till the voting ends....lolllll~!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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oh aiight.............
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Closed. Kwell wins 7-6. (it is whoever has the most votes Sunday at midnight)
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