Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

okay this battle goes to drastic
okay breakdown
chaos you had good flow, punches were aight coulda been better, personals were good still coulda been better, wordplay lacked, vocab was basic..and lines were basic too..and fix ya structure its horrible...

drastic-aight u came harder, better punches, flow was good, structure was off, lines were stretched some, your font makes it harder to read...fix it...,personals were good, meta's were good, punches were hittin harder, wordplay was nice, and vocab was okay

both need to elevate some tho...fix ya structures....no hate man
peace~1
v/drastic

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What the fuck another unexplained vote ... DID U EVEN READ THE VERSES??? or do you need to go to specsavers

what are you talking about i explained it all i read the verses thank you very much i told you how i felt each did with each catagory just cuz you dont take a verse and say wha u think of each bar dont mean you didnt explain it so quit complainin you just mad cuz u aint got a vote yet

cuz i told what you needed to work on and your flaws and what each did good too so actually if you read the rules that is explained stupid herb dont know what he talking about

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=157651&page=2

You need to BREAK DOWN MY VERSE AND TELL ME WOT I DID WRONG THERE IS NO PROOF IN YO VOTE THAT U READ ANY OF THE VERESES HERBALS

you dont need to break down the verse i told you what u did wrong in my vote in the fisrt place but just to please your herbish ass ill do it so you get off my nuts crying about how its not explained your a NEWB so you obviously dont know shit about the rules of voting cuz it dont say anywhere in it that you need to break down each verse bar by bar and comment on it so you know what im not and if you try to get my verse d/r'ed ill get it fixed and counted so dont even try it you lil herb
Peace~1

just to show how much an herb u are you posted the link to the battle all this is being posted in like its all that hard to get your verse on the 1st page..what an idiot
nuff said..

This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
 

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w/e lets get some votes in hurrrrrr lets go ~!...................

Upin for my win














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son ur not getting an win..........................w/e uppin for votes holla...........word

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Choas:
k bad stucture weak punchlines weak vocabulary pretty much you got merked...i cant say to much elese but damn you need the mad elevation your best line:
Fuck an hour . . you retarded bitch all i need is a minutes..
I'll take you out of YA RETIREMENT.. and beat ya ass back init!!!
^thats it...

DrasticMeasurez:
good verse kinda off on the stucture but good punches good vocabulary not realy to much multis but a few...your best line probably:
ur messing with the real arsonist,my punches leave more burn-spots than dalmation
punches attatch with spikes rippin ya inner tissue,like an bullet went throug givin u an fixation
^^thats your best line...your opener...

vote: DrasticMeasures

weeeeeeeeeerd uppin fo votes uppin damn it how long dis been slept uppin

Shut the fuck up you stupid BITER XCLUSIVE...

stupid ass vote did he get on your dick tooo..

GET SOME votes on this .. some REAL votes i merked this herb.

uppin for votes damn it uppin for votes word...........uppin