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return the favor

This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
 

*ahem* just checking da votes see how everythings going on

uppin 4 votes............
extrending to 50................

Voted For: BkBrawla

well done, i applaud BkBrawla. You had to say something about that Chris Reeves line.
Paradox.. good but not nearly as much depth.

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Voted For: Paradox

punches: paradox.....opener was cocky...i lyke that

flow: paradox....BK's verse was stretched...you coulda added multis to keep it from being stretched

open: paradox..."turd and blurps" dont rhyme...paradox hit em short simple an sweet.

close: paradox...they were both lacking, but BK's closing statements made no fucking sense...you remedial?

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both verses coulda been A LOT better....Bk, if you hada put more effort in it(werdplay, better constructed punches, creativety) you woulda prolly got this one....ya'll both need to up ya skillz and keep battlin

aiight thnks for the vote...and sorry that you didnt post in time in our battle...um..anyways uppin....

This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
 

checkin polls for this battle is all im doing
peace~!

uppin 4 vet votes...................................

Voted For: Paradox

im gonna have to go with paradox on this one.........

structure: neither one was too great....but bk's was the worst out of the two...

punchlines: paradox prolly took this just because half of bk's punches made absolutely no sense at all....some were ok....this prolly could have went either way

vocab: bk took this....paradox u have to work on your vocab....it could lose u a lot of votes in the future....

multis: neither one of you had one multi at all....you both have to work on that...it could cost u a lot of battles....if one of you would have had a few multis in there...that prolly woulda been the one i voted for because it was so close....

sorry bk...no hate at all......but i had to go with paradox because i thought his punches were a bit better.....this was not the greatest battle ive ever seen

no hate to either one of you
return the favor...post an honest vote on me vs. king dipset and me vs. destiny

finally all of the DR votes are taken off.....uppin

Voted For: Paradox

it sounds silly but paradox u aint elevated but ya 1st 4 lines murked him purely because of better wordplay...u closed tha coffin on this one coz ya opponents verse didnt make sense at all n u had punches n he didnt..well he did but there hard to read they dont flow so this goes ta paradox..peace man

uppin 4 votes....................................cmon somebody finish it

Voted For: Paradox

lol aight nice battle feelin both
but paradox won this one i gotta say...

Openin verse- Paradox
structure- Tied
Multis-B.B.k
punchlines-both good punches but paradox took it
metas-B.b.k
overallverse-paradox

close battle but u both did your thing
no hate on this vote