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Valor 12-18-05 10:27 PM

this was okay for an alright piece, this was a quite old read to be upped so no clue why this happened anyways...blaw decent read iguess...elevate on imagery however its much needed

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 12-18-05 10:33 PM

.. I Don't Believe It Need To Be Stated Yet : I Haven't Been On In A Good While That Is Where The 'Up' Came From Obviously ...

But Thanks For The Feedback...

King Solo 12-19-05 06:27 AM

this was cool, decent vocabs and shit and overall quality delivery, but the imagery was average at best, it needs to be upped to a higher level to make the quality of the piece that much better.

and...

welcome back, i ain't seen you on in a long ass time, not since i made that freeposting thread we had :)

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 12-19-05 09:09 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher
this was cool, decent vocabs and shit and overall quality delivery, but the imagery was average at best, it needs to be upped to a higher level to make the quality of the piece that much better.

and...

welcome back, i ain't seen you on in a long ass time, not since i made that freeposting thread we had :)


And I Have Not The Slightest Idea Of Whom You Are...


Thanks For The Feedback Though Was Appricaited

Dervla 12-19-05 09:34 AM

O_o....Back huh?.....

*Plays mace welcome back*.......

Lil C 12-19-05 09:55 AM

wow....damn i had to read dis 3 timez....lol......vocab n structure were both off da chain....da flow was hella good......damn ma.....nice job of reppin da femcees:)....plz leave some feed on my piece "Who Am I"....1

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 12-19-05 12:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by §ÄþþØ
O_o....Back huh?.....

*Plays mace welcome back*.......



Thank........................................You

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 12-19-05 01:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil C
wow....damn i had to read dis 3 timez....lol......vocab n structure were both off da chain....da flow was hella good......damn ma.....nice job of reppin da femcees:)....plz leave some feed on my piece "Who Am I"....1


Thanks 'C' For The FeedBack ... Most Appriciated -No Doubt-


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