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this was okay for an alright piece, this was a quite old read to be upped so no clue why this happened anyways...blaw decent read iguess...elevate on imagery however its much needed
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.. I Don't Believe It Need To Be Stated Yet : I Haven't Been On In A Good While That Is Where The 'Up' Came From Obviously ...
But Thanks For The Feedback... |
this was cool, decent vocabs and shit and overall quality delivery, but the imagery was average at best, it needs to be upped to a higher level to make the quality of the piece that much better.
and... welcome back, i ain't seen you on in a long ass time, not since i made that freeposting thread we had :) |
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And I Have Not The Slightest Idea Of Whom You Are... Thanks For The Feedback Though Was Appricaited |
O_o....Back huh?.....
*Plays mace welcome back*....... |
wow....damn i had to read dis 3 timez....lol......vocab n structure were both off da chain....da flow was hella good......damn ma.....nice job of reppin da femcees:)....plz leave some feed on my piece "Who Am I"....1
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Thank........................................You |
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Thanks 'C' For The FeedBack ... Most Appriciated -No Doubt- |
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