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DQ 12-02-04 12:58 PM

Voted For: Cautious

Cautious took this one: flow, vocab and wordplay was straight. Liked ya punches anf personals, didn't have too many self-glorifcation or played things in there so that's cool...Lil-Youngstah, you've got some mad played stuff in there, my favo lines were your last two...they were nice but the rest wasn't too spectacular actually...Flow was okay and stuff but didn't have anything in there that made me say: whoaaaa....

NY's Finest 12-04-04 04:59 PM

Voted For: Cautious

SON U BLEW HIM OUT THAT WAS NOT FUNNY I AINT EVEN READ HIS YOUR WHOLE VERSE WAS ON POINT

Sik Wit It 12-24-04 05:13 PM

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

This ain't no Challenge...Every1's "Cautios" about yo Wack-Rap
This freestyle's gonna end up...5-0 like in yo last Match
Decent
Your a newbie...Ya been knocked-out 1 Time
Steppin 2 me on-da-mic...is like steppin on a Land-Mine
Decent
U "Blowing" up in a Quick-Heated "Explosion"(BooM!)
now since u a her i'll spit-my-Flow "Slow Motion"

Dawg da facts about your versez...there ain't no need 2 be "Cautios"
Ya punchez & Structure stink badder then a Prostitutes cunt...It's makin me "Nautios"
Decent Closer

This nigga catch my bullets like a widerecever
and if i was lil-youngstah i wouldent like cautious neitha
On his profile he breakdances nigga u guy
I think i just found the 5th member of B2K
And if u really wonna hear some shit that hurts
Ill put u back in yo mama fuck her so i can be the daddy of yo birth
Your a kid so u must be a soft bitch
If i stuck his head in a pile of doo doo he still wouldent know shit
This guy is like milk his rapps turn sour
Ill nock yo ass out quicka then osama did the twin towers
Since your a youngtah do some work 2 make yo muscles rise
And jacking off is not considered a motherfuckun excercise
And you a kid so start this roomer quick type 2 everybody on this site and let em know u sucked Cautious dick
My punchlines are real they leave yo body hit
Ill blow yo brains out and niggas will think that ima a fuckin blow out kit
im not even gonna do ur whole shit…just elevate more and work on ur punches
& flow


Overall Lil-Y took this one…came harder in punches,
Had a better structure & the flow was good on the piece

Cuban~Storm 12-24-04 05:16 PM

This was feedback posted for Lil-Youngstah
 
checking pollz .

Lawless (Hs) 12-25-04 10:52 AM

Voted For: Cautious

DAMN..... you fucced em up kidd... precise personals won this for you I liked the personals...
lil youngstah's shit hardly made any sense.. it was so fuccin' lame... they way it's written I bet it's off beat lol... so the ersonals got this for me return the favor on my battle against Young Soulja

peace


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